Missing those beautiful baby blues
My tears use them as a creative muse
Quickly breaking the speed of sound
No more thumping can be found
Scouring the wreckage of my heart
Searching for a beat to slowly start
Finding a broken vessel in need of a crew
Navigating waters of the deep sea blue
Carisa Adrienne
93 thoughts on “The Wreckage”
Ádhamh
Simply beautiful, Carisa.
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Carisa Adrienne
I’m humbled… Thank you ❤️
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emotionsoflife2016
Lovel
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Carisa Adrienne
Yay! I’m so happy you love it! ❤️❤️ thank you!!!
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emotionsoflife2016
My pleasure ❤😚 remember you are awesome
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Carisa Adrienne
Woooohoooo! Thank you! ❤️ You too!
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tarnishedsoul
❤
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Carisa Adrienne
❤️😉😘
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wordsonemptyears
Holy. That was amazing. You’re amazing.
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, Yeah sometimes 😉 lol! Thank you!!!!! 😉❤️
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whisperer2darkness
lovely poem ….with beautiful symbolism
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Carisa Adrienne
I always love your comments. Thank you! 😃❤️
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whisperer2darkness
❤️because my heart is with you
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe! I can feel it ❤️
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whisperer2darkness
❤️feel it as new spring…so pleasent
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Jim
sweet
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, thanks Jim! ❤️😉
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Simon
Always beautiful Carisa, why not forget the crew and steer?
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you sweet Simon! ❤️ Well, I don’t know if you know this or not but some days I don’t know what day it is. Lol! Should I really be steering the ship!?
The crew is referencing how I need to be revived (drowning). As in CPR because I have no heartbeat. ❤️
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Simon
I do know that about you, I’ve sometimes corrected you. I don’t see this as an issue… Someone with a heart that beats like yours is special ❤
I see the reference now, you better get a crew then eh?
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Carisa Adrienne
Yup, I need a focused crew with calendars. ❤️ You’re always so kind to me! Thank you! ❤️😀
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Simon
I have a calendar lol…
You deserve kindness ❤😃
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Carisa Adrienne
You’re hired!!! 😃😃😃 Awe, thank you Simon :-). Everyone deserves kindness. We all don’t get it but we all deserve it. ❤️😉
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Simon
I’ve got an important job now, telling you when you are.
All true Carisa, we can only try 😃❤
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Copper Cranes
Carisa, beautiful and heartbreaking. We do hold on to the wreckage/memories, I’m not sure why that is, maybe just in order to feel something. Always wonderful writing. Please enjoy your day. Much love, Mia ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Mia!!! How I love your presence!!! Always makes me smile 😃 I don’t know why we hold onto memories that hurt us so much. I don’t want to think about the bad times because I’m focusing on the good times. However, those memories that make me blue seem to follow me. I just can’t swim fast enough to shake them. Maybe I need swim lessons. Lol 🙂 or life lessons. ❤️ Oh Mia, you’ve got me rambling. ❤️ Thank you for always supporting me and leaving the best comments!! Have a great day too!!! ❤️
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Copper Cranes
You’re welcome Carisa, my pleasure. Thank you for a wonderful reply. Swimming lessons, yay! I don’t believe you’re alone, these memories do have a way of floating to the surface, no matter how much we suppress them. I like to think it’s part of keeping the memories alive, both the good times and the bad. You know the yin and yang thing. But I’m a sentimentalist, at least that’s what I tell myself, ha-ha. 😉 ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Mia! You’re so good with words!! That makes so much sense! You speak with such beautiful thoughts and words even in your comments! I think you’re an amazing-talist!!! ❤️😉. Have a great night! 😀
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Copper Cranes
Carisa, thank you, your so kind. Love, the word, amazing-talist, I think your one too! 🙂 Have a wonderful and peaceful night. ❤
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thespiritkeepers
I do know so well the deep blue sea being a nemesis and having the silky hand of friendship which can turn the other way in a blink of an eye. I always enjoy your rhyming poetry and I particularly love this video. Be well my friend
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Carisa Adrienne
Joseph! Yes!! In the blink of on eye for sure!!! Thank you for the compliment on my rhyming. Sometimes I wish I didn’t feel the need to rhyme but I can’t stop. Lol! So glad you like the video. Hope you’re doing well. Thinking of you all the time!!❤️😉
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thespiritkeepers
🙂
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ksbeth
beautiful –
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Beth!!! ❤️
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Erika Kind
The wreck of the heart in the water…. amazing gif to your words, Carisa! All very touching. The song just followed me today… interesting that you posted it here too.
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Carisa Adrienne
Erika, thank you! I looked for the perfect gifs. The others weren’t the ones I envisioned while I wrote it. But I do love the gif of the ship wreckage. Isn’t that the best song ever. I love it!! We’re always on the same page. ❤️😉. Also.. Did you know this went to my spam folder!!?? I just happened to see it! ❤️
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Erika Kind
Yep, that one gif caught my attention not only for what it was but also in combination with your words. Truly one page… haha! Oh well, slowly I get used to it… lol! But thank your for finding and releasing me, Carisa 😊
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Carisa Adrienne
You’re always in the naughty list. Lol! ❤️😉😘
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Erika Kind
Looks like it.. haha 😁
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thelonelyauthorblog
So much beauty comes out of that wreckage.
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Carisa Adrienne
Andrew could you be any sweeter to me? The answer is… Nope! You couldn’t be! Thank you so much! 😉❤️
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Pimpf
very beautiful, deep and sad and the same time , thanks again
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you! I suppose we wouldn’t know what amazing felt like if we didn’t go through struggles. ❤️😉 Always love seeing you here!! 😀😀
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Poet Rummager
Wowsy! A poem as stunning as its author. There’s just something about the color blue that haunts me, too. Absolutely beautiful, Carisa. ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Rose!! Thank you! Thank you! You’re so kind!! ❤️😉 Yes! It’s a haunting color. Btw…My computer screen lit up with your comment!! ❤️😉😘
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you! Thank you! 😃
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wwwpalfitness
I’m glad you’re back around:)
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Carisa Adrienne
Paul!! Yay! Thank you!❤️😃
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wwwpalfitness
You’re welcome Carisa:)
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vidisha kaushik
Hello Carisa. I’m so glad I’ve found your blog, you write beautifully. What a wonderful blog you have here. Lovely. I do hope you’ll read mine too sometime. It was a pleasure to read yours. ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
What a beautiful comment to read before bedtime. Thank you! I’m humbled. I will for sure check out your site. Thank you again! 😃
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vidisha kaushik
You’re most dearly welcome! I’ll be awaiting your visit. Take care. Lots of love and best wishes to you.
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Laura
So beautiful!
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Carisa Adrienne
Laura! ❤️😉😘❤️. Thank you!! ❤️
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nataliescarberry
I always love what you put on here and I love you my sweet friend! I’m finding myself adrift on the big blue sea as well. And the sea is so wide and my boat is so small.
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Carisa Adrienne
Natalie, thank you ❤️ always love your presence! We may struggle alone in the sea but if we combine our boats… We’ll be able to encourage each other. ❤️😘😉. Sending you lots of love and peace. ❤️
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nataliescarberry
Good thinking missy❣😘
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jaiminder
Sounds blue 😃
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Carisa Adrienne
Hehe! That was a good one 😉
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Dave
Beautiful words, Carisa. I love the way you mix the photos with your gripping emotion. I didn’t know you wrote so well! I’ll have to check out more of your poetry!
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, Dave, you’re making me smile! Thank you! I’ve always been big on presentation. Maybe I go overboard a little. I like to think of my poems as screenplays and I’m the producer of them. Lol. If that makes sense. I was at your blog again today reading old posts of yours. I tried to like and comment on a few but it wouldn’t let me. It’s happened to me several times. I think it might be my phone rather than WP. I’ve got a cracked screen. But I’ll try again when I get over there again. You’re the amazing writer. Truly you are! ❤️😉
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Dave
Carisa, are you trying to melt my heart again? ❤️ I do hope you are able to comment on the posts you want when it’s working again. I can’t tell you how much I enjoy reading your uplifting comments. You’re the best! 🙂 And so creative! I love that you see your poems as screenplays and you’re their producer. It makes perfect sense. I’ll go back and read more of your older work. Have a beautiful day where you are. x
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sirensong1208
So very beautiful and moving…
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you!! You always bring me joy! ❤️😃
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sirensong1208
As do you Lovely. x
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The Power&The Glory
https://thelighteningandthefire.wordpress.com/2016/07/12/alive-at-five/
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Grandtrines
Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog.
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Carisa Adrienne
Oh my! I never saw this! Thank you! Thank you!
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Grandtrines
You are welcome!
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Miracle :)
Very beautifully penned !
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R.H. (Rusty) Foerger
Here you are “breaking the speed of sound” yourself. Is it the” tears,” or is it the “creative muse” that breaks the speed of sound? No need to answer – the poem stands on its own to create curiosity in your reader. Well done.
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, Rusty! I never this comment! I never see when someone responds to my comments either! I apologize! I always love your comments. I admire you so much! Thank you for the kind words!!! ❤️😉
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mopana
Wow! Gorgeous lines, Carisa 🙂
You’re so profound. Hugs and kisses ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Monica! Never saw this comment! ❤️ Thanks you!!! ❤️😉😘
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mopana
No problem, Carisa 🙂 It is never too late
xoxo ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Goodness! Monica. I just love you! ❤️😉😃
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mopana
I love you, too, Carisa ❤ :*
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Carisa Adrienne
❤️
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utahan15
i m a wreck
i do not neck
my speck
is in my eye
i cannot breath
gasping
for love
it is for
me in reality
on my bed
in my
head
kinked
even
at the ejaculation!
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Carisa Adrienne
I love it when you write for me ❤️😉😘
Thank you!
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utahan15
yw it makes me smile as well
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Carisa Adrienne
❤️😉😘
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utahan15
your town or mine carisa? lmao
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utahan15
nobody knows
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Carisa Adrienne
❤
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Chrissy
love what you did here, and that song gets to all parts of me
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Carisa Adrienne
Chrissy! I never saw this comment! Thank you for always giving generous kind compliments! Yes$!! That song is amazing!
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Chrissy
No problem x
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Carisa Adrienne
❤️
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Chrissy
👯💜
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Kabir Malik
Oh, Carisa :’)
Your pen says it all.
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Carisa Adrienne
Kabir!!! You’re so good to me! Thank you! ❤️
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