Lost and shattered without you here
No words of wisdom for me to hear
Spinning madly out of control
Falling down the rabbit hole
On my knees trembling to stand
Searching for your helping hand
Reaching up, but failing to grasp
Pleading with each and every gasp
Bargaining for just a mere glance
Grant me one last song and dance
Intertwine your fingers with mine
Shadow dancing on cloud nine
Feeling the calmness of your skin
For a moment I’m whole once again
Carisa Adrienne
76 thoughts on “Shadow Dancing”
Eric
❤ goodnight, Beautiful Carisa.
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Carisa Adrienne
Goodnight my knight in shining armor ❤
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Eric
🛡💕💕
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emotionsoflife2016
Marvelous post
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Carisa Adrienne
I’m humbled ❤️ Thank you!
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emotionsoflife2016
The honor is all mine ☺❤👍😚
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, you’re the best ❤️😉
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emotionsoflife2016
😊😄😉❤Nop, you are
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Carisa Adrienne
Hehe 🙂
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rachel
your words get me every time. ❤️
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Carisa Adrienne
You’re words do the same for me! I love you! ❤️😘
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tarnishedsoul
This fills me with longing…
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Carisa Adrienne
I’m so glad you could feel my words. I’m honored it resonated with you! Thank you for the beautiful comment! ❤️
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tarnishedsoul
There was something wonderful about it, that I can’t describe all the emotions going through me when reading it.
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Carisa Adrienne
I’m so honored ❤️.
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tarnishedsoul
By moi? I can’t imagine why, but I’m happy if my comment made you happy. 🌸
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Cezane & Michelle
I really! Love this style of writing..
To have the lines amplified by images..
To get to that perfect fit match level only few can master it..
Absolutelt beautiful! – Cezane
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you so much! I’ve always loved presentation of projects I’ve done. I can remember in the 4th grade when I had to do an oral book report my teacher brought in other teachers for me do it for them too. 🙂 maybe I went overboard on it!
I think of my writings as a script for movie and I cast the images in it. Hehe!! Writing that out made me laugh! Thank you for your wonderful comment! ❤️
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persoinpoesia2015
I am always taken by your words Carisa. Strumming hearts to feel. Lovely 🙏➰❤️
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Carisa Adrienne
Thump… Thump… We’re drumming together. ❤️😉🙏
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motherinlondon
Your poetry is so so touching, romantic and just beautiful ❤️ you are so very talented my friend xxxxxx
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Carisa Adrienne
You always get me smiling. Thank you my wonderful friend. Hope you have a great Week!!! ❤️😀
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motherinlondon
The feeling is mutual my dearest ❤️😘❤️😘❤️😘
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Grandtrines
Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog and commented:
Really like the updated look to the blog! Impressive!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you for always supporting me❤️
It’s so hard to find the right theme for my site. Thank you for letting me know you like it! The picture is of Downtown where I live. I’ve lived here my whole life. I love the Picture ❤️
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Grandtrines
The pic is great. And this theme is much better for navigation. Many people pick themes that look good but are terrible for navigation. That makes reading the site difficult. This is a good theme re: navigation. And, again, great pic!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you for letting me know that. The themes also look different if you’re on your phone or PC. They look totally different. I’m keeping this one. Hehe 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Monica! Thank you so much. I could feel the emotions in your words. The most precious thing for me when I write is when someone else can feel my words. I’m so honored by your words. ❤️
Also, I was wondering where you’ve been! I hadn’t seen you around. I’m so glad I’ve found you! I’ll be over to see you! ❤️
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Michael
I need that sweet sensation of living in your love
I can’t breath when you’re away, it pulls me down
You are the question and the answer am I
Only you can see me through
I leave it up to you
Do it light, taking me through the night
Shadow dancing, baby you do it right :-*
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Carisa Adrienne
Ummmm, do you write or something? I love your piece!! I’m smiling thinking how my writing could inspire words so beautiful! Michael… You always know how to make me feel special! ❤️
Thank you!
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Michael
Beautiful girl, I wish I could claim those words…it was written for/by Andy Gibb (remember his song, Shadow Dancing?). That said you did inspire my connection of those lyrics to you! :-)<3:-* Shadow dancing…baby, you do it right 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
lol! I completely love your soul! I just left your site with a comment about this. I love Shadow Dancing. I’m a silly girl not connecting the words. I think maybe I’m too busy dancing to it and not listening to the words. That’s not like me not recognizing lyrics to songs. I’m falling off my game. 🙂 Still honored my writing was connected to the song. I prefer your writings better anyway! 🙂 ❤️😉
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Michael
No, no pretty lady…it is all my fault. I should have put quote marks around it.:-) I can totally see you dancing to that oldie but goodie! That one really gets me going too…a very sensual and hot vibe. You are still the reigning music maestro! <3:-*
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Carisa Adrienne
Woohoo! I’ll put my Crown back on! ❤️😉
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Michael
Yes…Dancing Queen👸😘
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Carisa Adrienne
🙂 ❤️
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Erika Kind
Oh, how I can relate to this….. you always such amazing words (and gifs) to express your feelings!
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Carisa Adrienne
Erika! The feeling of wanting/bargaining for one last chance to feel complete again. It relates to so many aspects in my life.
Thank you :). I think I go overboard on the gifs sometimes. Hehe! ❤️😉
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Erika Kind
Yes, I can imagine that there are a lot of situations that fit your poem. But then again…. aren’t all adding a piece to our life that makes it a bit wholer? That is something that just came to my mind. Even a person that leaves our life leaves something for our life. And when we collect all the pieces we created from our experiences, relationships, and encounters it completes our being in a new extended way…. just pondering…
Oh, the gifs…. just keep up going that way. I love it. You are my gif master 😘 💖
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thespiritkeepers
Beautiful words just as beautiful you. ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Joseph, you know you were on my mind as I wrote this. I know the grief you’re carrying. My heart is always with you.
I hope it can beat for you when yours skips a beat because of grief. ❤️🙏😘
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thespiritkeepers
Thank you, you are very kind and thoughtful. Much love
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Copper Cranes
Carisa, beautifully written. You’ve captured such a sense of longing and all the emotions that go along with one last time. Wonderful. Wishing you a lovely day. ~ Mia ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Mia, I wish I could put into words how your words effect me. I admire you completely, so when you feel my words I’m so honored. It brings limitless emotions to me. Thank you for being you!
Wishing you a happy Sunday! ❤️
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Copper Cranes
You’re so welcome Carisa. I love that you have the ability to isolate an emotional event and write so passionately about it. Thank you for such kind words. Happy Sunday to you too! ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Mia! 🙂 ❤️
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syl65
This is beautiful, Carisa.
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Carisa Adrienne
Syl, thank you so much for the wonderful comment. 🙂
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syl65
You’re welcome, my pleasure 😊
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Movin' it with Michelle
Beautiful!!!!!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Michelle ❤️😀
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cinammonswirlgirl83
I can feel the pain, fear and hope in your words. This is quite an emotional poem, my dear friend. I know that I will remember your words for a very long time. You reached inside us all and laid out our deepest feelings. Stunning. Love, Cara♥
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Carisa Adrienne
Cara, you’re so sweet to say such beautiful words. Thank you so much! Yes, this one is very close to my heart. Grief is such a hard emotion. I hope you’re doing well! I’m not on WP as much as usual and I think we’re missing each other! Always thinking of you. ❤️
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cinammonswirlgirl83
Your kind words easily make a home in my heart. With my affection Carisa, always.♥ Communicating with friends like yourself is what makes my life wonderful. Your friend, Cara
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Carisa Adrienne
❤️😉😘
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wwwpalfitness
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you! Paul you’re so kind ❤️
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wwwpalfitness
You’re welcome Carisa:)
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Hector
Beautiful! that song squeezed my heart
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Carisa Adrienne
Hector! I didn’t see this comment! Thank you for reading it. It’s so personal to me. The song has been on repeat for over a week now. I can tell you love music the way I love music. I don’t think anyone really listens to the songs besides you. 🙂 I’ll always post them for you and I :)❤️
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Hector
I listen to everything you post but not stalking you I promise ❤️
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Carisa Adrienne
Well I am staking you:) ❤️
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Hector
🙂
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thelonelyauthorblog
Beautiful write my dear friend
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Carisa Adrienne
Andrew I don’t know why your comments are always landing either in spam or where it doesn’t show up in notifications. I have to look at the web itself. Soooo sorry! I love your comments! I admire your work so much! Thank you for always supporting me and my writing. You’re abso-Fucking-lutely Ah-Ma-Zing!! ❤
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thelonelyauthorblog
Hey look at this comment. It was totally lost now it reappeared in my wordpress.
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Laura
Beautiful 💜
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you!!!!❤️❤️
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nalinidesignprofile
Beautiful
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you so much! ❤️
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Purpleanais
Oh, how I feel this. Breaks my heart but at the same time restores my faith in humanity…it’s good to know there are people out there who can feel, even if they feel pain…still better than being numb and cold. And now I believe I’ll shut up lol
Sorry, it’s late over here and I’m sleep deprived 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, thank you! This is one of my favorite pieces I’ve ever written. Longing for someone is an emotion that cannot be described. Thank you for the genuine comment. ❤️
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Purpleanais
You’re welcome, it is a beautiful, powerful piece 🙂
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Cloud Nine 69
Very short and powerfully nice!!! Kudos!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you! Thank you! 🙂 ❤
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