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Shadow Dancing

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Lost and shattered without you here
No words of wisdom for me to hear
Spinning madly out of control
Falling down the rabbit hole

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On my knees trembling to stand
Searching for your helping hand
Reaching up, but failing to grasp
Pleading with each and every gasp

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Bargaining for just a mere glance
Grant me one last song and dance
Intertwine your fingers with mine
Shadow dancing on cloud nine

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Feeling the calmness of your skin
For a moment I’m whole once again

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Carisa Adrienne

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76 thoughts on “Shadow Dancing

  1. ❀ goodnight, Beautiful Carisa.

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  2. rachel on said:

    your words get me every time. ❀️

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  3. tarnishedsoul on said:

    This fills me with longing…
    πŸ’–

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  4. Cezane & Michelle on said:

    I really! Love this style of writing..
    To have the lines amplified by images..
    To get to that perfect fit match level only few can master it..
    Absolutelt beautiful! – Cezane

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    • Thank you so much! I’ve always loved presentation of projects I’ve done. I can remember in the 4th grade when I had to do an oral book report my teacher brought in other teachers for me do it for them too. πŸ™‚ maybe I went overboard on it!

      I think of my writings as a script for movie and I cast the images in it. Hehe!! Writing that out made me laugh! Thank you for your wonderful comment! ❀️

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  5. I am always taken by your words Carisa. Strumming hearts to feel. Lovely πŸ™βž°β€οΈ

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  6. Your poetry is so so touching, romantic and just beautiful ❀️ you are so very talented my friend xxxxxx

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  7. Grandtrines on said:

    Reblogged this on Still Another Writer's Blog and commented:

    Really like the updated look to the blog! Impressive!

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    • Thank you for always supporting me❀️
      It’s so hard to find the right theme for my site. Thank you for letting me know you like it! The picture is of Downtown where I live. I’ve lived here my whole life. I love the Picture ❀️

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      • Grandtrines on said:

        The pic is great. And this theme is much better for navigation. Many people pick themes that look good but are terrible for navigation. That makes reading the site difficult. This is a good theme re: navigation. And, again, great pic!

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        • Thank you for letting me know that. The themes also look different if you’re on your phone or PC. They look totally different. I’m keeping this one. Hehe πŸ™‚

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    • Monica! Thank you so much. I could feel the emotions in your words. The most precious thing for me when I write is when someone else can feel my words. I’m so honored by your words. ❀️
      Also, I was wondering where you’ve been! I hadn’t seen you around. I’m so glad I’ve found you! I’ll be over to see you! ❀️

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  9. Michael on said:

    I need that sweet sensation of living in your love
    I can’t breath when you’re away, it pulls me down
    You are the question and the answer am I
    Only you can see me through
    I leave it up to you

    Do it light, taking me through the night
    Shadow dancing, baby you do it right :-*

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    • Ummmm, do you write or something? I love your piece!! I’m smiling thinking how my writing could inspire words so beautiful! Michael… You always know how to make me feel special! ❀️
      Thank you!

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      • Michael on said:

        Beautiful girl, I wish I could claim those words…it was written for/by Andy Gibb (remember his song, Shadow Dancing?). That said you did inspire my connection of those lyrics to you! :-)<3:-* Shadow dancing…baby, you do it right πŸ™‚

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        • lol! I completely love your soul! I just left your site with a comment about this. I love Shadow Dancing. I’m a silly girl not connecting the words. I think maybe I’m too busy dancing to it and not listening to the words. That’s not like me not recognizing lyrics to songs. I’m falling off my game. πŸ™‚ Still honored my writing was connected to the song. I prefer your writings better anyway! πŸ™‚ β€οΈπŸ˜‰

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        • Michael on said:

          No, no pretty lady…it is all my fault. I should have put quote marks around it.:-) I can totally see you dancing to that oldie but goodie! That one really gets me going too…a very sensual and hot vibe. You are still the reigning music maestro! <3:-*

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        • Woohoo! I’ll put my Crown back on! β€οΈπŸ˜‰

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        • Michael on said:

          Yes…Dancing QueenπŸ‘ΈπŸ˜˜

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        • πŸ™‚ ❀️

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  10. Oh, how I can relate to this….. you always such amazing words (and gifs) to express your feelings!

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    • Erika! The feeling of wanting/bargaining for one last chance to feel complete again. It relates to so many aspects in my life.
      Thank you :). I think I go overboard on the gifs sometimes. Hehe! β€οΈπŸ˜‰

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      • Yes, I can imagine that there are a lot of situations that fit your poem. But then again…. aren’t all adding a piece to our life that makes it a bit wholer? That is something that just came to my mind. Even a person that leaves our life leaves something for our life. And when we collect all the pieces we created from our experiences, relationships, and encounters it completes our being in a new extended way…. just pondering…
        Oh, the gifs…. just keep up going that way. I love it. You are my gif master 😘 πŸ’–

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  11. Beautiful words just as beautiful you. ❀

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  12. Carisa, beautifully written. You’ve captured such a sense of longing and all the emotions that go along with one last time. Wonderful. Wishing you a lovely day. ~ Mia ❀

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  13. This is beautiful, Carisa.

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  14. I can feel the pain, fear and hope in your words. This is quite an emotional poem, my dear friend. I know that I will remember your words for a very long time. You reached inside us all and laid out our deepest feelings. Stunning. Love, Caraβ™₯

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  15. wwwpalfitness on said:

    Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.

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  16. Beautiful! that song squeezed my heart

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  17. Beautiful write my dear friend

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  18. Beautiful πŸ’œ

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  19. Oh, how I feel this. Breaks my heart but at the same time restores my faith in humanity…it’s good to know there are people out there who can feel, even if they feel pain…still better than being numb and cold. And now I believe I’ll shut up lol
    Sorry, it’s late over here and I’m sleep deprived πŸ™‚

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  20. Cloud Nine 69 on said:

    Very short and powerfully nice!!! Kudos!

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