Sometimes Silver Linings are Blue

Sorry Not Sorry

27 Jan 2016
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Hit Me

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Rise up with courage fight the beast
Be brave- Be wild- Or he will feast
His appetite is fierce he won’t give in
Leaving massive scars deep within
Gather up your anguish to fight the savage
Ready for clemency Ready to ravage
Release your heartache to be your drive
Leading to its death but you will survive

Carisa Adrienne

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130 thoughts on “Hit Me”

  1. tentninja on said:

    Such an awesome film. And a great poem to match

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  2. zigzagstripes on said:

    Love this, feisty!

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  3. thespiritkeepers on said:

    Aww! My little Pat Benatar. I haven’t heard of her I won’t tell as I will date myself. What happened to the dirty poem? No scrub brush here. LOL

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  4. Erika Kind on said:

    Yes, I love that! Look the beast in the eye and see how it shrinks. Transform the heartache into constructive energy. That was a powerful poem, Carisa, and a great song to go with! πŸ’ͺ

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  5. Dave on said:

    Lovely write Carissa

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  6. Geetha B on said:

    I hope you are well. This poem struck me as being very linked with some deep hurt and I do hope I am wrong. Lovely write nevertheless

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    • Carisa Adrienne on said:

      Thank you, Geetha! I do have colossal scars that I’ve carried all my life. I think we all have scars that seem to pop up again and again. I’m trying to be stronger than the pain. Life can be unfair but it can also be beautiful! Always love seeing you, Gerrha! Thank you for all your kindness! πŸ™‚

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  7. hooklineandinkwell on said:

    so very true…we have to have the courage to let it go… great poem and awesome accompanying animated gifs. Oh, and the song – sigh, that takes me back and so apt πŸ™‚

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    • Carisa Adrienne on said:

      Thank you! I’m humbled πŸ™‚ I believe you’re right about courage. I never thought I had courage… As I’ve grown I’m proud of myself. I’m uneasy about certain things but it doesn’t stop me from moving forward. Pat is one of my all time favorites. All her songs are so fierce and inspiring. πŸ™‚

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      • hooklineandinkwell on said:

        You are welcome, Carisa! πŸ™‚ We never know what we have within us until we need it. What you describe is courage – kudos! Yes, Pat’s music is timeless and has always sent great messages. πŸ™‚

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  8. The Bioman on said:

    Pat Benatar! Jeez but she was sexy!! As a scoolbuy, she was right up there with Annefried and Agnetha from ABBA. I don’t have to listen to sing: “You don’t fight fair, that’s okay, see if I care!” Beats “Can you hear the drums, Fernando!”)

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  9. rachel on said:

    i’m in your corner…let me know if you need to tag out. i’ll help you kick some ass! πŸ‘ŠπŸΌ

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  11. sonofabeach96 on said:

    “…catch more honeys being fly”
    I nearly spit out my drink reading that part of your tag line. That’s awesome! πŸ˜ƒ

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  12. stacilys on said:

    Yes, you are survivor, aren’t ya. πŸ™‚ ❀
    I remember this song from oh so long ago. Hahaha.
    Hope you’re well Carisa.
    πŸ™‚ ❀

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  13. Eric on said:

    Kick some ass, Strong Beautiful Lady! I’ve got your back, always! ❀

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  14. Eric on said:

    Also! if you and Rachel take over the world, please let me know! I have a few requests! πŸ˜‰

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  15. el Zaphod on said:

    Brutal πŸ˜€

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  16. thelonelyauthorblog on said:

    Carisa, I am a little confused. Not sure how to respond. We’re not supposed to talk about the fight club. Haha Lovely work. Powerful words.

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  17. mvitrano on said:

    Really Beautiful Carisa…we are all survivors of something, and your empowering words help those of us that still struggle ღ

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    • Carisa Adrienne on said:

      Hi! Mark πŸ™‚ I’m right there with you on struggling. We are all survivors of somethings is the truth, isn’t it!? It’s sometimes bewildering what the body can endure. I would rather go through the worst pain delivered rather anything to do with my heart. Somethings stay with us our lifetime. I’m learning to embrace my struggles that I know I will never get over.
      The phrase…”It is what it is” is released from my mouth everyday. I always know you get me! I’m sorry you do but we can encourage each other! πŸ˜‰ ❀

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  19. Lennon Carlyle on said:

    Girl! This is fucking awesome! You are so talented.

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  20. Wally Fry on said:

    I like Pat Benatar! The music of my youth LOL. She can still belt it out, too.

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  21. wafflemethis on said:

    Found it, you didn’t let me know, and we had a deal. Tut Tut.πŸ˜‰
    So come on then, Hit me with your best shot.
    Keep on fighting Crazy Lady❀

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  22. jennannsd on said:

    Ah… Pat Benetar… One of my karaoke go-to songs since I already know all of the words πŸ™‚

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  23. Rita on said:

    You know how I feel about this topic in general. GO GIRL! Call if you need help.

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  24. Michael on said:

    You are such a strong, beautiful woman! The beast has met its match (insert muscle flexing emoji)!!! πŸ™‚

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  25. michnavs on said:

    The film and poem… perfect combination.

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  26. charlypriest on said:

    It went from desperation (the poem before this one) to being a fighter, that was good.
    And as always beautiful written,by the way, you really expect me to get into a fight with you after Reading this last poem…..

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  27. Hector on said:

    “fierce and inspiring” is something you seem to reflect well my dear πŸ™‚

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  28. Carisa Adrienne on said:

    Hehe! Glad to know we still haven’t had our first fight! πŸ˜‰ ❀️ Thank you for your kind words too! I thank you! πŸ˜‰

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  29. Kabir Malik on said:

    Killer and a powerful piece .. The more i am reading your poems .. the more i want to read πŸ™‚

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