Breathless, I’m going down
You’re the only air around
Melting, sliding needing your flow
Swaying calmly ever so slow
Pleading to take you in
Sinking, slipping skin to skin
Hungry for more needing to swallow
Deeper and deeper breaths follow
With bated breath, inhaling your generous drive
Once again giving me the essence to survive
Carisa Adrienne
“Lips”
Pull me in, don’t let go
On your mark, ready set
Feel your breath on my neck
Your lips, they got me going
Heart flips, you got me floatin’
Your lips, your lips
Your lips, they got me going
Heart flips, you got me floatin’
Your lips, your lips
Overwhelmed, hazy eyes
Staring at tinted skies
And I like what we do
Running wild just us two
Your lips, they got me going
Heart flips, you got me floatin’
Your lips, your lips
Your lips, they got me going
Heart flips, you got me floatin’
Your lips, your lips
Your lips, they got me going
Heart flips, you got me floatin’
Your lips, your lips
Your lips, they got me going
Heart flips, you got me floatin’
Your lips, your lips
Sip each second drink it slowly
Watch the hours melt away
Sip each second drink it slowly
Watch the hours melt away
Your lips, they got me going
Heart flips, you got me floatin’
Your lips, your lips
Your lips, they got me going
Heart flips, you got me floatin’
Your lips, your lips
Your lips, they got me going
Heart flips, you got me floatin’
You got me float in’
Your Flips
65 thoughts on “Deep Breath”
Casey Michael Smith
Wow. That’s very hot. I feel each of your posts pulls something new from my emotions. You are amazing. 😀💚
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Carisa Adrienne
Hehe! 🙂 Thank you, Case! It wasn’t until recently I thought about posting more of these types of poems:-) You’re the amazing one!! 🙂 💜🙃💜
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Casey Michael Smith
I love it. You should definitely share more like this!!! 😘💚
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Carisa Adrienne
Hehe! You are making me smile. 🙂
You’re the best! WP is kinda driving me nuts the past few posts, because my posts don’t show in the Reader. Me and WP customer service are on a first name basis! Ha! Btw.. Did you like the way I called you Case!? I just noticed it on my previous comment. 🙂 Hope you’re all settled in! 💜💕😉
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Casey Michael Smith
Yes, I noticed you calling me that the other day. It made me laugh.
I’m sorry you’re frustrated with WP. I’ve been so busy lately that I have not had a chance to notice if things are messed up on my end.
We’re moving slowly on this moving thing. I’m exhausted. I need a beer and my woman by my side. 😀💚
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Carisa Adrienne
You need your woman and a beer …. And your 3 girls asleep ! 🙂 ha! I remember when my boys were that age!! That’s when I got addicted to diet mt dew! You’re a great husband and father!! 🙃💜
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Casey Michael Smith
Thank you, Carisa. That’s all I ever want to be. The rest of it is just superfluous. 😃💚
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The V-Pub
Amazing, Carisa! The words truly transcend the written and pave way for the physical. It becomes a tactile feeling for me when I read this poem. Intensely adorned with GIF’s that fit it perfectly. Very, very well done! 💗💗
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Eric Syrdal
Whew!!! Yep……ok. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥
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Carisa Adrienne
: ) I’ll take that as a good thing : ) 💕
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Eric Syrdal
Very good thing. That was amazing!
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Carisa Adrienne
You’ve made me smile : ) Thank you, Eric!
You know how much I love hearing from you!
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Eric Syrdal
Happy to do it! Keep smiling, Carisa!
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wwwpalfitness
Smexy
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha!! I like that word! I’m going to have to use that in a poem 🙂 Thank you:-)
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wwwpalfitness
Well you are so I will allow it 😉
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha! 😉
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wwwpalfitness
Surprised you never heard it used before. LOL. But I have been on crazy message boards for over 15 years. 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha!! 🙂
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wwwpalfitness
:):):)
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wwwpalfitness
I wrote a wiseass post for you…
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Carisa Adrienne
Ha!!
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mvitrano
Passionately seductive ღ
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you! You know I love your words 💕
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thelonelyauthorblog
Loved Deep Breath. Especially that last line Once again giving me the essence to survive. Powerful. Loved it from the first word to the last. Lips -very sweet. Enticing writing. Carisa you are a wonderful writer.
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe… You’ve made me feel so special today. I admire you immensely! I think you’re a great writer!! 💕💕
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thelonelyauthorblog
Oh, you made me blush. You’re the great writer. “Deep Breath” left me breathless. I write with a laptop, you write from the heart.
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Hector
wow!
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Carisa Adrienne
: ) 😊
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charlypriest
Forget about the green card, you got me reading this….. you hottie di hot, I´m jumping the Atlantic…yeeehaa! 😉
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha!! You’re killing me!! I’d say you’ve been on vacation to long! 🙂
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charlypriest
That one is very true, you could come and visit to “hotel Claifornia”….
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha!! I hear they are very busy and the food isn’t very good! I do hear they have a good workout facility. I did get a ride there one time. The security was impressive and very tight. I didn’t stay because they were overcrowded that day. I haven’t really wanted to return! 😉
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charlypriest
Good idea
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Kabir Malik
Carisa, please tell me. How do I see the world through your eyes ?
That was soul stirring. Amazing,
Short words with whole lot of feelings, emotions.
Captivating.
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Carisa Adrienne
Always, always making me feel so encouraged. 🙂 Thank you, Kabir! I don’t know if viewing the world through my eyes is the key… Maybe viewing the wold through my pen. 😉 I don’t even know if that is to be desired, but I love that you think so! You bring me sunshine on rainy days! Thank you! 💕❣💕
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Kabir Malik
Hey! you have made me feel so many new feelings that I am short of words here. from encouraging to supporting to reading all my work. every bit counts. Thank you.
I have to accomplish my dreams with strong determination so that I can make my People proud.
and, I hope everything is fine and happy at your end, Carisa 🙂
Stay blessed. stay this charming, always 💚
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Carisa Adrienne
Kabir.. I know you make your people proud! I have no doubt! Accomplish your dreams and make them reality. You can do it! I believe in you! I do! 💜
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Lynz Real Cooking
Amazing Carisa!!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Lynz!! ❤️💕❣ 🙃😉😊
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Lynz Real Cooking
🙂
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Christian Marc
Lip biting is hot
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Carisa Adrienne
Yup!! 🙂
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wwwpalfitness
I nominated you for a challenge I nominated you for a challenge. https://wwwpalfitness.wordpress.com/2015/11/11/3-days-3-quotes-challenge-day-1/
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Carisa Adrienne
Whaaaaaa!!??? Thank you! 🙂 I will do my best! 🙂
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wwwpalfitness
I am sure you will do fine. It’s me I am worried about. 🙂
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charliezero1.wordpress.com
Passionate and lip biting hot romantic love.
Excellent poem. 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe! Thank you! 🙂 🙃😉😊
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charliezero1.wordpress.com
It’s my very pleasure. 🙂
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Rita
Oh My! Did I say I was starting to love you? It’s a done deal. This is absolutely fantastic.
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha!! 😉 I’m glad because I absolutely love you! Thank you, Rita!! 💕
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Rita
Happy Thursday ❤
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artman413
Oh boy…that is some hot stuff!
I love how your passion flows through your words, as if sensuality runs through your veins. Reading one of these posts feels…like a kiss.
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Carisa Adrienne
You’re making me blush! 😉 thank you for always being so kind and complimenting. I’m always anxious about releasing posts like this. I’m so glad you could (Ahem) feel it. 😉 I need to come and visit your site! 💜💕I’ll be there in a bit! 🙂
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artman413
Haha, it’s hard not to feel that old school love. 😉
You’re always welcome to drop by the site, though I haven’t posted anything new, sadly. I got carried away with my ‘short’ hiatus. I’ll need to put something up pretty soon!
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Carisa Adrienne
Yup! Old School Love is the best 😉 So Simple but so Good! Yes!!! Get something out pronto!! Kidding.. I’ll be waiting 💜💕
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persoinpoesia2015
listen………..sigh!……….wordless praise
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Simon
Wow, hot, powerful… amazing Carisa ❤😘
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Carisa Adrienne
Sometimes a deep breathe is all I need! 😉❤️
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Simon
I’m sure most of the time you yearn for more? 😉❤
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Carisa Adrienne
God yes! I sometimes need to be 21 again! 🙂
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Simon
Tell me about it, I’m 41 and feel like I’m 61 sometimes.
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Carisa Adrienne
I hear ya! I hear ya loud and clear 😉
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Simon
I suspected you might… but your smile always make you you so youthful! 😉😘
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