Sometimes Silver Linings are Blue

65 thoughts on “Deep Breath”

1. Casey Michael Smith on November 10, 2015 at 2:57 pm said:

   Wow. That’s very hot. I feel each of your posts pulls something new from my emotions. You are amazing. 😀💚

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   • Carisa Adrienne on November 10, 2015 at 3:37 pm said:

     Hehe! 🙂 Thank you, Case! It wasn’t until recently I thought about posting more of these types of poems:-) You’re the amazing one!! 🙂 💜🙃💜

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     • Casey Michael Smith on November 10, 2015 at 4:20 pm said:

       I love it. You should definitely share more like this!!! 😘💚

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       • Carisa Adrienne on November 10, 2015 at 4:46 pm said:

         Hehe! You are making me smile. 🙂
         You’re the best! WP is kinda driving me nuts the past few posts, because my posts don’t show in the Reader. Me and WP customer service are on a first name basis! Ha! Btw.. Did you like the way I called you Case!? I just noticed it on my previous comment. 🙂 Hope you’re all settled in! 💜💕😉

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       • Casey Michael Smith on November 10, 2015 at 7:28 pm said:

         Yes, I noticed you calling me that the other day. It made me laugh.

         I’m sorry you’re frustrated with WP. I’ve been so busy lately that I have not had a chance to notice if things are messed up on my end.

         We’re moving slowly on this moving thing. I’m exhausted. I need a beer and my woman by my side. 😀💚

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       • Carisa Adrienne on November 11, 2015 at 3:49 am said:

         You need your woman and a beer …. And your 3 girls asleep ! 🙂 ha! I remember when my boys were that age!! That’s when I got addicted to diet mt dew! You’re a great husband and father!! 🙃💜

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       • Casey Michael Smith on November 11, 2015 at 6:25 am said:

         Thank you, Carisa. That’s all I ever want to be. The rest of it is just superfluous. 😃💚

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2. The V-Pub on November 10, 2015 at 3:03 pm said:

   Amazing, Carisa! The words truly transcend the written and pave way for the physical. It becomes a tactile feeling for me when I read this poem. Intensely adorned with GIF’s that fit it perfectly. Very, very well done! 💗💗

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3. Eric Syrdal on November 10, 2015 at 4:48 pm said:

   Whew!!! Yep……ok. 🔥🔥🔥🔥🔥

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   • Carisa Adrienne on November 10, 2015 at 7:05 pm said:

     : ) I’ll take that as a good thing : ) 💕

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     • Eric Syrdal on November 10, 2015 at 7:27 pm said:

       Very good thing. That was amazing!

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       • Carisa Adrienne on November 10, 2015 at 8:23 pm said:

         You’ve made me smile : ) Thank you, Eric!
         You know how much I love hearing from you!

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       • Eric Syrdal on November 10, 2015 at 8:28 pm said:

         Happy to do it! Keep smiling, Carisa!

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4. wwwpalfitness on November 10, 2015 at 5:35 pm said:

   Smexy

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   • Carisa Adrienne on November 10, 2015 at 7:06 pm said:

     Haha!! I like that word! I’m going to have to use that in a poem 🙂 Thank you:-)

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     • wwwpalfitness on November 10, 2015 at 7:18 pm said:

       Well you are so I will allow it 😉

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       • Carisa Adrienne on November 10, 2015 at 7:24 pm said:

         Haha! 😉

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       • wwwpalfitness on November 10, 2015 at 8:01 pm said:

         Surprised you never heard it used before. LOL. But I have been on crazy message boards for over 15 years. 🙂

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       • Carisa Adrienne on November 10, 2015 at 8:13 pm said:

         Haha!! 🙂

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       • wwwpalfitness on November 10, 2015 at 9:20 pm said:

         :):):)

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       • wwwpalfitness on November 10, 2015 at 10:37 pm said:

         I wrote a wiseass post for you…

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       • Carisa Adrienne on November 10, 2015 at 10:44 pm said:

         Ha!!

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5. mvitrano on November 10, 2015 at 5:42 pm said:

   Passionately seductive ღ

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   • Carisa Adrienne on November 10, 2015 at 7:08 pm said:

     Thank you! You know I love your words 💕

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6. thelonelyauthorblog on November 10, 2015 at 6:18 pm said:

   Loved Deep Breath. Especially that last line Once again giving me the essence to survive. Powerful. Loved it from the first word to the last. Lips -very sweet. Enticing writing. Carisa you are a wonderful writer.

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   • Carisa Adrienne on November 10, 2015 at 7:09 pm said:

     Awe… You’ve made me feel so special today. I admire you immensely! I think you’re a great writer!! 💕💕

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     • thelonelyauthorblog on November 10, 2015 at 7:29 pm said:

       Oh, you made me blush. You’re the great writer. “Deep Breath” left me breathless. I write with a laptop, you write from the heart.

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7. Hector on November 10, 2015 at 9:05 pm said:

   wow!

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   • Carisa Adrienne on November 10, 2015 at 10:39 pm said:

     : ) 😊

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8. charlypriest on November 11, 2015 at 6:04 am said:

   Forget about the green card, you got me reading this….. you hottie di hot, I´m jumping the Atlantic…yeeehaa! 😉

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   • Carisa Adrienne on November 11, 2015 at 6:07 am said:

     Haha!! You’re killing me!! I’d say you’ve been on vacation to long! 🙂

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     • charlypriest on November 11, 2015 at 6:14 am said:

       That one is very true, you could come and visit to “hotel Claifornia”….

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       • Carisa Adrienne on November 11, 2015 at 12:52 pm said:

         Haha!! I hear they are very busy and the food isn’t very good! I do hear they have a good workout facility. I did get a ride there one time. The security was impressive and very tight. I didn’t stay because they were overcrowded that day. I haven’t really wanted to return! 😉

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       • charlypriest on November 12, 2015 at 6:15 am said:

         Good idea

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9. Kabir Malik on November 11, 2015 at 6:33 am said:

   Carisa, please tell me. How do I see the world through your eyes ?
   That was soul stirring. Amazing,
   Short words with whole lot of feelings, emotions.

   Captivating.

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   • Carisa Adrienne on November 11, 2015 at 1:02 pm said:

     Always, always making me feel so encouraged. 🙂 Thank you, Kabir! I don’t know if viewing the world through my eyes is the key… Maybe viewing the wold through my pen. 😉 I don’t even know if that is to be desired, but I love that you think so! You bring me sunshine on rainy days! Thank you! 💕❣💕

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     • Kabir Malik on November 13, 2015 at 5:54 am said:

       Hey! you have made me feel so many new feelings that I am short of words here. from encouraging to supporting to reading all my work. every bit counts. Thank you.

       I have to accomplish my dreams with strong determination so that I can make my People proud.

       and, I hope everything is fine and happy at your end, Carisa 🙂
       Stay blessed. stay this charming, always 💚

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       • Carisa Adrienne on November 14, 2015 at 6:55 am said:

         Kabir.. I know you make your people proud! I have no doubt! Accomplish your dreams and make them reality. You can do it! I believe in you! I do! 💜

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10. Lynz Real Cooking on November 11, 2015 at 9:14 am said:

    Amazing Carisa!!

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    • Carisa Adrienne on November 11, 2015 at 12:48 pm said:

      Thank you, Lynz!! ❤️💕❣ 🙃😉😊

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      • Lynz Real Cooking on November 11, 2015 at 12:59 pm said:

        🙂

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11. Christian Marc on November 11, 2015 at 11:03 am said:

    Lip biting is hot

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    • Carisa Adrienne on November 11, 2015 at 12:22 pm said:

      Yup!! 🙂

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12. wwwpalfitness on November 11, 2015 at 12:15 pm said:

    I nominated you for a challenge I nominated you for a challenge. https://wwwpalfitness.wordpress.com/2015/11/11/3-days-3-quotes-challenge-day-1/

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    • Carisa Adrienne on November 11, 2015 at 7:45 pm said:

      Whaaaaaa!!??? Thank you! 🙂 I will do my best! 🙂

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      • wwwpalfitness on November 11, 2015 at 8:21 pm said:

        I am sure you will do fine. It’s me I am worried about. 🙂

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13. charliezero1.wordpress.com on November 11, 2015 at 1:40 pm said:

    Passionate and lip biting hot romantic love.

    Excellent poem. 🙂

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    • Carisa Adrienne on November 11, 2015 at 7:46 pm said:

      Awe! Thank you! 🙂 🙃😉😊

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      • charliezero1.wordpress.com on November 12, 2015 at 11:25 am said:

        It’s my very pleasure. 🙂

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14. Rita on November 11, 2015 at 9:41 pm said:

    Oh My! Did I say I was starting to love you? It’s a done deal. This is absolutely fantastic.

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    • Carisa Adrienne on November 12, 2015 at 1:12 am said:

      Haha!! 😉 I’m glad because I absolutely love you! Thank you, Rita!! 💕

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      • Rita on November 12, 2015 at 6:59 am said:

        Happy Thursday ❤

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15. artman413 on November 12, 2015 at 3:01 am said:

    Oh boy…that is some hot stuff!

    I love how your passion flows through your words, as if sensuality runs through your veins. Reading one of these posts feels…like a kiss.

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    • Carisa Adrienne on November 12, 2015 at 11:06 am said:

      You’re making me blush! 😉 thank you for always being so kind and complimenting. I’m always anxious about releasing posts like this. I’m so glad you could (Ahem) feel it. 😉 I need to come and visit your site! 💜💕I’ll be there in a bit! 🙂

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      • artman413 on November 12, 2015 at 11:45 am said:

        Haha, it’s hard not to feel that old school love. 😉

        You’re always welcome to drop by the site, though I haven’t posted anything new, sadly. I got carried away with my ‘short’ hiatus. I’ll need to put something up pretty soon!

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        • Carisa Adrienne on November 12, 2015 at 1:18 pm said:

          Yup! Old School Love is the best 😉 So Simple but so Good! Yes!!! Get something out pronto!! Kidding.. I’ll be waiting 💜💕

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16. persoinpoesia2015 on December 1, 2015 at 8:54 pm said:

    listen………..sigh!……….wordless praise

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17. Simon on June 18, 2016 at 3:41 pm said:

    Wow, hot, powerful… amazing Carisa ❤😘

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    • Carisa Adrienne on June 18, 2016 at 4:20 pm said:

      Sometimes a deep breathe is all I need! 😉❤️

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      • Simon on June 18, 2016 at 4:23 pm said:

        I’m sure most of the time you yearn for more? 😉❤

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        • Carisa Adrienne on June 18, 2016 at 4:25 pm said:

          God yes! I sometimes need to be 21 again! 🙂

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        • Simon on June 18, 2016 at 4:37 pm said:

          Tell me about it, I’m 41 and feel like I’m 61 sometimes.

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        • Carisa Adrienne on June 19, 2016 at 12:55 am said:

          I hear ya! I hear ya loud and clear 😉

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        • Simon on June 19, 2016 at 3:42 am said:

          I suspected you might… but your smile always make you you so youthful! 😉😘

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