Sometimes Silver Linings are Blue

Sorry Not Sorry

18 Dec 2015
129 Comments

Let me be…

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Let me be the…

beat to your heart
finish to your start
ink to your pen
guilt to your sin

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Let me be the…

lyrics to your song
right to your wrong
curves to your trace
smile to your face

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Let me be the…

answer to your why
stars to your sky
eyes to your view
me to your you

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Carisa Adrienne

2014

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129 thoughts on “Let me be…”

  1. thelonelyauthorblog on said:

    Nice work. How about I let you be the writer who inspires me?

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  2. Souldiergirl on said:

    Gorgeous honey!! I adore you btw xxx

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  3. el Zaphod on said:

    It felt like you wrote that just for me 😀

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  4. Ryan Stone on said:

    Wow! You held the rhyme together with plenty of style – not easy to do at all. The flow is beautiful. Love it, Carisa.

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  5. Eric on said:

    LLLLLLLLLLoooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee THIS!
    What an amazing arrangement! I love the coupling of the words, falls so easily on the tongue. You did a great job with this, Carisa! Beautiful. ❤

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    • Carisa Adrienne on said:

      Eric… How did I know you might say you loved it 😉 ❤️. Thank you! Thank you! I almost didn’t post it. I felt it was so simple. I know I love simple but wasn’t for sure how it would be felt. :). I’m
      So glad you LOVE it ;). Eric.. I haven’t seem you in my Reader. I hope I haven’t missed any of your posts. I know you’ve had your hands full. ❤️. Thank you my sweet friend. I will double check your site to make sure. Thank you for all the kind words. 😉 ❤️

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      • Eric on said:

        Umm…maybe because you are awesome? And it really is that good!…I might be a little biased but I don’t think it’s clouding my judgement here. 😉 I see you found some of the entries I’ve done on the Pantheon series. Don’t miss Karma and Courage. I think you’ll really like those. I’m on my way home from work. I’ll catch up with your comments a little later. Have a great evening, Beautiful Lady! ♡ 😊 and thank you for your wonderful words.

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  6. hooklineandinkwell on said:

    This is gorgeous! You capture what many of us want ‘to be’. 🙂

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  7. motherinlondon on said:

    Just so beautiful, so much meaning ❤️❤️😘😘

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  8. moonskittles on said:

    Looks like you had fun writing this one Carisa. I like it 🙂
    ❤

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  9. wwwpalfitness on said:

    Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.

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  10. Lynz Real Cooking on said:

    Very beautiful as always dear Carisa!

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  11. mopana on said:

    I love your style Carisa 🙂 So simple and yet so much meaning

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  13. vivifiedveracity on said:

    I smiled reading this….Then I smiled reading the comments….btw, I’m still smiling.

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  14. daviddiamondblog on said:

    // p.s. i love you // no. its p.s. i blog you // think it blogs baby // thank you xz

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  15. daviddiamondblog on said:

    Reblogged this on daviddiamondblog and commented:

    // this bitch is hot // thank you xz

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  16. persoinpoesia2015 on said:

    who wouldn’t fall for those words, wait, am getting up, ok, damn, fell again

    Beautiful Carisa, just beautiful

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  17. Amitav Chowdhury on said:

    This is your heart speaking in poetry. Lovely write.

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  18. Dave on said:

    Beautiful. Sentiment expressed to perfection

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  19. jacobemet on said:

    Beautifully penned, Carisa. 🙂

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  21. jaiminder on said:

    Loved it ☺ me to your you!!

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  22. lifeconfusions on said:

    Olalala I loved this Carisa !! You are so talented ! ❤
    And enjoyed the song so much, I really like One republic, hadn’t heard of this song of theirs. such a lovely song!! Totally dancing to it , hehe ^_^

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  23. Kruti Mehta on said:

    OMG! this can actually bring in goosebumps on my skin! Beautiful song 🙂

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  24. wwwpalfitness on said:

    I nominated you for this challenge. Have fun…https://wwwpalfitness.wordpress.com/2015/12/20/3-days-3-quotes-challenge/

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  25. lonerloaner on said:

    ‘me to your you’ 💙👌👏

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  26. Jennifer Calvert on said:

    Love this beautiful Carisa! X

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  28. Kabir Malik on said:

    You know what! Know matter what! You will always and forever be my favourite poetess/poet. You are one of a kind.

    When I read your words, they just sink into my subconsciousness.

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  29. Human Interest on said:

    This was beautifully written! Amazing work Carisa!

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  30. Sharon Yvonne on said:

    The intro to this poem makes me think of the song in Thumbelina. Let me be your wings.

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  31. michnavs on said:

    I love the verses… whimsical…

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  32. The Bioman on said:

    Happy New Year! V V V nice pome! Thanks for the like too – coming from an accomplished poet such as yourself…..cheers!

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    • Carisa Adrienne on said:

      Thank you!! You too! 🙂 I’m humbled by your words. Thank you for the sweet compliments! I look forward to reading more of your words. 🙂 🌟✨

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      • The Bioman on said:

        I’m no wordsmith like you I am afraid – with me it’s trench warfare getting the words onto the page!! Thanks for the follow too – the Bio Hook site is quite stagnant – I keep it so others can refer to my research. But roughtradegibson or Bioman is my poetry site. Take care! B

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  33. Rashid Abbasi on said:

    Remarkable! Your blog deserves more attention. I have a feeling of discovering a treasure!

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  34. Michael on said:

    “The stars to your sky” – what amazing space that would be… This entire work was so dreamy and satisfying. I loved it!

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  35. dougstuber on said:

    Sure sure, Anything you need to make a happy day, you can be that all over living room, all over the outdoors. What shalln it be then, today? Would you change who you are oftne if you could be anyone, on a day to day basis? I sure would! Here’s a poem for ya:

    Hargraves Blues
    OCTOBER 21, 2014 / DOUGSTUBER / EDIT
    Hargraves Blues

    No obstacles in the physical realm can stop the
    Flow of fix or ruin. One bicyclist, content to move
    In limited space, dodges traffic, kicks her stand
    And heads in to read. She gets paid to read, not many do.

    No life is long enough to support all the relationships
    We build: kids to cats, Moms to cleaning, teacher-student,
    Boss to worker. One walker strides down Rosemary Street,
    Pulls his hat over his ears, holds palms open, seeking change.

    No gesture, however insignificant, goes unseen
    In a town full of women. Drivers bounce from one plan
    To another, running reds. Phone calls, calendar notes and
    Breakfast fill seconds between lane changes, defying death.

    No effort, regardless of intention, can sew a revolution
    Without mass appeal. Two men shrug, walking into shade.
    Nothing for them to do but drink and smoke and go to sleep.
    The truth is here to see but no one’s looking anymore.

    No wind, even from Saskatchewan, can clean us now.
    Some loudmouth stumbles in offering to teach, but
    None will have it. A rider, bussing there and back for free,
    Takes comfort when a man stands to offer her a seat.

    No sandwich, ever so scrumptious, lingers past initial taste.
    Sun shines on a bouncing orb. Four for four, he’s another
    Wizard with his hands. He does not get paid to shoot a ball.
    His hand-to-eye skills have no value in this part of the world.

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