Let me be the…
beat to your heart
finish to your start
ink to your pen
guilt to your sin
Let me be the…
lyrics to your song
right to your wrong
curves to your trace
smile to your face
Let me be the…
answer to your why
stars to your sky
eyes to your view
me to your you
Carisa Adrienne
2014
129 thoughts on “Let me be…”
thelonelyauthorblog
Nice work. How about I let you be the writer who inspires me?
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Carisa Adrienne
You’re making me smile and blush! Anyone would be honored for that. I admire all your work and creativity. I’m so glad we’ve found each other. 🙂 Thank you for the nice words on the writing. 🙂
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getsamani
Hola Carisa,como esta,como hago para tener un amor de una mujer,que me quiera por la eternidad,donde quiero una mujer humilde y caritativa donde no allan apariencias abstractas mas que todas concretas y simples de desrrollar en la vida,donde nos propongamos metas que se puedan lograr donde caminemos por un mismo camino ,estoy saliendo de de …algo como esclavitud al viajar ,espero que me ayude a encontrar mi novia de un origen anglosajona,que alli descarga toda mi energia de amor ,pero luego gracias le amo,buenas tardes.
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you for your thoughtful comment. I’m not sure what it says but I will try and translate it. :). I’ll be back ; )
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getsamani
gracias
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thelonelyauthorblog
Smiling. Have a good weekend my friend.
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Carisa Adrienne
You too!!! cart wheels and
smiles. 😉
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thelonelyauthorblog
lol
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Souldiergirl
Gorgeous honey!! I adore you btw xxx
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Kristen! ❤️. You’re the one I adore. Gorgeous on the inside and out. ❤️
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el Zaphod
It felt like you wrote that just for me 😀
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Carisa Adrienne
Hmmmmmmm… Maybe read it again 🙂 💚
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el Zaphod
lol too shy to admit that you did eh? 😀
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Carisa Adrienne
Hehe… You’re a mess 🙂
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el Zaphod
:p
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Carisa Adrienne
Are you done shopping !?
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el Zaphod
Yes, why do you ask ? to see if I got you something? 😉
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Carisa Adrienne
Exactly! What did you get me 🙂
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el Zaphod
Something that fits a naughty girl perfectly 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
OMGEE!!! A Cadillac Escalade!!??? I hope it’s black 🙂
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el Zaphod
who said it would something rewarding? 😀 hahahahahaha
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Ryan Stone
Wow! You held the rhyme together with plenty of style – not easy to do at all. The flow is beautiful. Love it, Carisa.
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Carisa Adrienne
Ryan…always the one who says such wonderful things to me. Thank you 🙂
It’s funny I found this poem in a notebook. I have about 10 other poems written in the same form. I recall I was sitting in a shopping mall and watched the people walk in and walk out. I watched how people interact and started from there. (Haha) I wrote this one thinking of what my fantasy would be… Haha.. Funny what inspires us to write.
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Ryan Stone
I like how you can read an old poem years later and it transports you back to where/when you wrote it so vividly.
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Carisa Adrienne
Ryan, I realize you get me more each day. 🙂
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Eric
LLLLLLLLLLoooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee THIS!
What an amazing arrangement! I love the coupling of the words, falls so easily on the tongue. You did a great job with this, Carisa! Beautiful. ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Eric… How did I know you might say you loved it 😉 ❤️. Thank you! Thank you! I almost didn’t post it. I felt it was so simple. I know I love simple but wasn’t for sure how it would be felt. :). I’m
So glad you LOVE it ;). Eric.. I haven’t seem you in my Reader. I hope I haven’t missed any of your posts. I know you’ve had your hands full. ❤️. Thank you my sweet friend. I will double check your site to make sure. Thank you for all the kind words. 😉 ❤️
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Eric
Umm…maybe because you are awesome? And it really is that good!…I might be a little biased but I don’t think it’s clouding my judgement here. 😉 I see you found some of the entries I’ve done on the Pantheon series. Don’t miss Karma and Courage. I think you’ll really like those. I’m on my way home from work. I’ll catch up with your comments a little later. Have a great evening, Beautiful Lady! ♡ 😊 and thank you for your wonderful words.
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hooklineandinkwell
This is gorgeous! You capture what many of us want ‘to be’. 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, what an amazing compliment. ❤️
Thank you for the kind words. I couldn’t ask for anything nicer. 🙂
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hooklineandinkwell
You are welcome, my friend…all true 🙂
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motherinlondon
Just so beautiful, so much meaning ❤️❤️😘😘
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Carisa Adrienne
You know I love seeing you in my notifications!! Thank you so much!! ❤️😉😘
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motherinlondon
❤️😘😘😘😘
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moonskittles
Looks like you had fun writing this one Carisa. I like it 🙂
❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Dajena! It was fun 🙂 since I started writing at age 7 I’ve always rhymed. That’s what I feel I do best. So this was a lot of fun! 😉 It’s always fun to write about love, right!? 😉 ❤️
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moonskittles
Rhyming and love is fun, of course!! 😀
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wwwpalfitness
Reblogged this on wwwpalfitness.
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you my sweet wonderful friend 🙂
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wwwpalfitness
You’re quite welcome. I wrote a couple quick now, but yours is better.:)
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Carisa Adrienne
You wrote some like mine? Where are they? Let me see!!! 🙂
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wwwpalfitness
My last two but I had two funny ones about 6 back on my roll.
https://wwwpalfitness.wordpress.com/2015/12/18/is-all-of-me-enough/
https://wwwpalfitness.wordpress.com/2015/12/18/can-you-just-stay/
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Lynz Real Cooking
Very beautiful as always dear Carisa!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you my dear sweet, Lynz!!! ❤️😉
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Lynz Real Cooking
Love this!
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Carisa Adrienne
😉 ❤️
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mopana
I love your style Carisa 🙂 So simple and yet so much meaning
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you much! I’ve learned simple is good 😉 ❤️
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desertmoon62
Love this…
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Carisa Adrienne
You’re way to kind to me , desert moon 😉 ❤️. Thank you for Taking the time to
Read here. I appreciate you greatly. 😉 ❤️
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vivifiedveracity
I smiled reading this….Then I smiled reading the comments….btw, I’m still smiling.
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Carisa Adrienne
I smiled reading your moments. I’m still
Smiling as I type 😉 thank you so much! 😉 ❤️
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daviddiamondblog
// p.s. i love you // no. its p.s. i blog you // think it blogs baby // thank you xz
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daviddiamondblog
Reblogged this on daviddiamondblog and commented:
// this bitch is hot // thank you xz
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you for reblogging my post. I appreciate you greatly. 🙂
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daviddiamondblog
// didn’t you already thank me? // and damn you’re so hot! and interesting! // Thank you xz
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Carisa Adrienne
Im very grateful for your interest in my posts. Thank you 🙂
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persoinpoesia2015
who wouldn’t fall for those words, wait, am getting up, ok, damn, fell again
Beautiful Carisa, just beautiful
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Carisa Adrienne
Antony, have I told you that I absolutely love you!!???? Because!!!! I do!!!
I’m the one who falls for you at every turn ❤️😉
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persoinpoesia2015
Oh no. Ok send me your laundry. 😝
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha… How about I just come and see you 😉
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persoinpoesia2015
Ok. I’ll see if I can gather up some hockey gear for you to wear in case you fall 😂
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Carisa Adrienne
Hahahaha… You’re a fast thinker! I will be falling constantly if you are around 🙂
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persoinpoesia2015
Ok. I’ll have a scooter ready. This way you’ll just sit and be safe 😀. Plus it would be fun to run over pedestrians on sidewalks lol
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Carisa Adrienne
Antony you know my type of fun;) ❤️
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persoinpoesia2015
Hi Carisa. Hope you’re having a great day.
Would you like to collaborate on a poem with me. If you do I have an idea.
My personal email is
Antony.ros.2015@gmail.com
Please reply when you can. I’ll send you my idea
Smiles and Hugs
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Carisa Adrienne
Yup! We’re going to make beautiful words together 🙂 ❤️
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persoinpoesia2015
Waiting lol
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Carisa Adrienne
Hehe!! I love you!! I think it will turn our perfect! :). I’m going to email you here in a bit 🙂 😄😉🌟❤️💕😘
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Amitav Chowdhury
This is your heart speaking in poetry. Lovely write.
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Amitav! I love seeing you here. It means so much to me. 🙂 ❤️
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Amitav Chowdhury
Always welcome. ♥ It’s my pleasure, Carisa. 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
You’re makes welcome here. Always. You’re one of my absolute favorites. 🙂 always. ❤️
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Amitav Chowdhury
That’s really sweet of you, Carisa. You have a beautiful heart. 🙂 ♥
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Carisa Adrienne
So do you 😉 ❤️
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Amitav Chowdhury
🙂 ♥
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Dave
Beautiful. Sentiment expressed to perfection
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Dave! You’re words are greatly appreciated. ❤️
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jacobemet
Beautifully penned, Carisa. 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Jacob! I’m humbled by your words. I admire all your work 🙂 ❤️
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jacobemet
Thanks. I sometimes wonder why I write anymore…
I appreciate your readership. 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Jacob, please know I’m loving your words you’re very talented. Please continue to write. 🙂
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jacobemet
Sometimes we forget the strength of a single, sweet gesture. Thank you.
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wwwpalfitness
I have nominated you for an award https://wwwpalfitness.wordpress.com/2015/12/19/dragons-loyalty-award-number-2-this-week-wow/
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jaiminder
Loved it ☺ me to your you!!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you!! I’m so glad you liked it! That makes me very happy 😉
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lifeconfusions
Olalala I loved this Carisa !! You are so talented ! ❤
And enjoyed the song so much, I really like One republic, hadn’t heard of this song of theirs. such a lovely song!! Totally dancing to it , hehe ^_^
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Carisa Adrienne
Zeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!! I’m jumping on my bed again ;). I’m so glad you like it! It makes me so happppppppy 🙂 ❤️😉❤️❤️✨
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lifeconfusions
Haha, you are literally a bubble of cuteness and happiness Carisa !!! lol ❤ ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
You make me that way 😉 ❤️
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Kruti Mehta
OMG! this can actually bring in goosebumps on my skin! Beautiful song 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Kruti!! I’m so glad we’ve connected. I’ve seen you around and have respected you greatly. I look forward to reading more of you!! We will have a great friendship! ❤️
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Kruti Mehta
Hey carisa 🙂 same here thanx
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Carisa Adrienne
😉❤️✨💕
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wwwpalfitness
I nominated you for this challenge. Have fun…https://wwwpalfitness.wordpress.com/2015/12/20/3-days-3-quotes-challenge/
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you so much! I will see what I can come up with! You’re so kind to think of me 🙂
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wwwpalfitness
They are not too bad to do
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Carisa Adrienne
You’re right 🙂
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wwwpalfitness
Copy me back when you do it
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lonerloaner
‘me to your you’ 💙👌👏
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, I’m so
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Carisa Adrienne
I’m so glad you like it :). That makes me so very happy 🙂 ❤️
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Jennifer Calvert
Love this beautiful Carisa! X
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Carisa Adrienne
Jennifer, you are 😉❤️🙏. Thank you!
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Jennifer Calvert
Hehe no you are! 😉❤️
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messupdressup03
I loved this ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, that makes me so happy you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for letting me know. Truly brought a smile 😉 ❤️
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messupdressup03
Anytime! Keep smiling 😄
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Kabir Malik
You know what! Know matter what! You will always and forever be my favourite poetess/poet. You are one of a kind.
When I read your words, they just sink into my subconsciousness.
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Carisa Adrienne
Kabir, Hello 🙂 I hope you had a wonderful christmas!!! I know 2016 will be the best year for both of us!!! Get to writing and posting young man:) ❤ ❤ ❤
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Human Interest
This was beautifully written! Amazing work Carisa!
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, you’re making me blush! Thank you for the kind words :). ❤️
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Human Interest
Really?! 😏
You’re welcome! 😘😍
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Carisa Adrienne
Hehe 🙂 😉❤️😘
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Human Interest
😁
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Sharon Yvonne
The intro to this poem makes me think of the song in Thumbelina. Let me be your wings.
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, that’s a wonderful comment. Thank you! ❤️❤️
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michnavs
I love the verses… whimsical…
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you so much! I love that word… whimsical 🙂 I’m honored for it to describe a piece of me 🙂 ❤
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michnavs
Your welcome… keep writing..
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Carisa Adrienne
I’m will! 🙂 Thank you for the encouragement. ❤️
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The Bioman
Happy New Year! V V V nice pome! Thanks for the like too – coming from an accomplished poet such as yourself…..cheers!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you!! You too! 🙂 I’m humbled by your words. Thank you for the sweet compliments! I look forward to reading more of your words. 🙂 🌟✨
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The Bioman
I’m no wordsmith like you I am afraid – with me it’s trench warfare getting the words onto the page!! Thanks for the follow too – the Bio Hook site is quite stagnant – I keep it so others can refer to my research. But roughtradegibson or Bioman is my poetry site. Take care! B
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Rashid Abbasi
Remarkable! Your blog deserves more attention. I have a feeling of discovering a treasure!
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Carisa Adrienne
You’re very kind. Thank you very much! I’m humbled by your heartfelt compliments. ❤️
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Michael
“The stars to your sky” – what amazing space that would be… This entire work was so dreamy and satisfying. I loved it!
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Carisa Adrienne
Hehe.. Could you make me smile any bigger!?? The answer is… Nope! I appreciate you more than I could ever express ❤️
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dougstuber
Sure sure, Anything you need to make a happy day, you can be that all over living room, all over the outdoors. What shalln it be then, today? Would you change who you are oftne if you could be anyone, on a day to day basis? I sure would! Here’s a poem for ya:
Hargraves Blues
OCTOBER 21, 2014 / DOUGSTUBER / EDIT
Hargraves Blues
No obstacles in the physical realm can stop the
Flow of fix or ruin. One bicyclist, content to move
In limited space, dodges traffic, kicks her stand
And heads in to read. She gets paid to read, not many do.
No life is long enough to support all the relationships
We build: kids to cats, Moms to cleaning, teacher-student,
Boss to worker. One walker strides down Rosemary Street,
Pulls his hat over his ears, holds palms open, seeking change.
No gesture, however insignificant, goes unseen
In a town full of women. Drivers bounce from one plan
To another, running reds. Phone calls, calendar notes and
Breakfast fill seconds between lane changes, defying death.
No effort, regardless of intention, can sew a revolution
Without mass appeal. Two men shrug, walking into shade.
Nothing for them to do but drink and smoke and go to sleep.
The truth is here to see but no one’s looking anymore.
No wind, even from Saskatchewan, can clean us now.
Some loudmouth stumbles in offering to teach, but
None will have it. A rider, bussing there and back for free,
Takes comfort when a man stands to offer her a seat.
No sandwich, ever so scrumptious, lingers past initial taste.
Sun shines on a bouncing orb. Four for four, he’s another
Wizard with his hands. He does not get paid to shoot a ball.
His hand-to-eye skills have no value in this part of the world.
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