Winter, tasting snowflakes fall upon my face
Summer, watching the sun’s wonder and its grace
Spring, smelling the red sweet rose in the breeze
Fall, hearing the swaying of falling leaves
Touching Winter, Spring, Summer and Fall
You are my constant love throughout it all
Carisa Adrienne
97 thoughts on “Sensing You”
cwviderkull
Beautiful.
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you so much! I’m humbled 🙂
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motherinlondon
Beautiful
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you!!! I’m so glad to see your beautiful face in my notifications!!! Hope you have a great week! 😉😘
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motherinlondon
❤️😘
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Heartafire
Such beautiful words, one of my favorite songs by the Beatles, what’s not to love about this!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Holly! I was trying to think of a good song for the poem and it came to mind immediately! I love the song too ❤️
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Heartafire
I love it so much, it almost makes me cry.
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rachel
❤️
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Carisa Adrienne
Ditto my love 🙂 ❤️
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Nimmi
Wow!! So beautiful words and pictures!! 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Nimmi! Your kind words are making me smile today! Thank you!! You’re the best! ❤️
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Nimmi
Ah!! Glad to know that. May your day brings lots of happiness and love! Pleasure is all mine dear! 🙂
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thelonelyauthorblog
Beautifully written. Love the last line. So fitting for this piece.
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Carisa Adrienne
Well, hello there! 🙂 Always humbled when you compliment me. I admire you so much. 🙂 Thank you!!
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thelonelyauthorblog
Thank you so much. Your Silver Linings are always bright. You are one of those writers, that I am happy to run across in my reader. Have a good one.
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Wet Bliss
You covered all five nicely in this one. 😉
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you! Trying to get all the seasons and the all the senses in was my main goal. Thank you for noticing 😉
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Eric
Beautifully done, Carisa. ❤ you’re such a wonderful Poetess!
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha!!! Eric, you simply make me smile so much!! You’re wonderful!! I’m so thankful for you! Also, I’m humbled by your compliments!!! ❤️
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Eric
You should smile!! You have a beautiful smile, I’ve seen it! 🙂
Good news with my sister today! She has been talking a lot and actually asking for food so…it’s definitely positive progress. It’s made my heart a lot lighter!
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Carisa Adrienne
My sweet Eric! How did I miss this comment!!? I’m so happy to hear about your sister. I think about her everyday and pray for the best. I can’t tell you how happy you’ve made me. Thank you for letting me know. 🙂 Smiling because your heart is feeling so good! 🙂 Tomorrow is going to be an even better day!!! Sweet Dreams ❤️
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Eric
Sweet dreams, Carisa!! Thank you so much!!! I think WP likes to hide us from each other sometimes. But we still find our way! I’ll see you tomorrow! 🙂 ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha!! Those sneaky WP tricks! 😉 They don’t know how determined we are ❤️
Sweet Dreams!
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Eric
❤💕❤
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Eric
Hope you are having a good day, Carisa!
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Carisa Adrienne
I am :-). Thank you for checking in on me! I was just thinking about you! Hope your day is going fabulous!!❤️❤️
((((((To your sister))))))❤️❤️
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Eric
Glad things are well with you!! And thank you for the warm wishes. ❤💕❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Like the new gravatar 🙂 ❤️
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Eric
🙂 thank you, time for me to retire that pipewrench. big hugs
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Carisa Adrienne
Yay!!! I like seeing your face. Throw that pipe wrench far away 🙂
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Eric
Done! 🙂 ❤
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Eric
Is your day getting any better? I hope so.
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Carisa Adrienne
Ahhh… I just saw this! I’m sorry!
Yes. It’s getting better because it’s getting close to bedtime! Yay me! :-). How is your sister doing today? I thought about you guys a lot today! ❤️💕💜 Hope you have a peaceful relaxing night… 🙂
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Eric
She’s getting along ok today. The doctor says it will take a lot of time to get back to being able to function on her own. But we take each bit of good news and hold onto it.
Thank you so much, Sweet Carisa. I hope you have a relaxing night too.
All my best. ❤ 💕 ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
It’s so hard to watch someone we love have so many challenges. It’s especially difficult when they didn’t do anything to cause them. Those are the most inspiring people of all. How they rise from the depths of hell with courage and determination. Thank you for telling me.
I truly mean that. I’m grateful you share her progress with me. I think about her often. I don’t know if I’ve ever told you about my boy? He reminds me of your sister with courage. Also, I have to go and look on my posts to see if I’ve missed any comments. Sorry if they are delayed responses. ❤️💕❤️
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Eric
Thank you, Carisa! I completely agree with every word of this! and no worries about the delayed responses, its ok!
Thank you for giving my heart a boost this morning, Dear Lady.
All my best! ❤
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Casey Michael
You amaze me. The vision you have to tie everything together is fantastic. This is another great job!
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe… Case, you have no idea how much I appreciate you’re words. Your feedback is important to me. Thank you for making me smile 💜😃
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Casey Michael
I hope I can repay the kindness that you always show me! 💚🙄
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Carisa Adrienne
I’m so sorry for anything I’ve done to you. I know you’re deleting my comments. I’m just so sorry. I will not be liking or com-meting if that is best. I truly don’t know what I’ve done. My boy has been ill the past few days. I’ve been off WP a lot. You were someone I felt a bond with. Now I’ve been a shitty friend. I’m so sorry… You don’t owe me anything. No explanation or anything. I’m just so confused.
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Casey Michael
What?
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Carisa Adrienne
My stuff is being moderated. My comments won’t show up. Have I hurt you?
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Casey Michael
No! It’s not on my end!
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Carisa Adrienne
I comment long and thoughtful comments and they show up then they are deleted. Casey, I believe you… I truly do.. But if I’ve done something I’m so sorry.
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Carisa Adrienne
I’m sorry.
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Casey Michael
Don’t be! I don’t know what is going on. I’m not ignoring you or deleting your comments. I promise! 💚😄
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Carisa Adrienne
My heart has been broken this month. Another friend I felt a deep bond with turned on me. Hence, the poem yesterday. And then I thought you were mad at me. I was about to fold and give up WP. You probably thought I wasn’t commenting on your pieces, huh?
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Casey Michael
You had mentioned your child was ill, so I figured you had your hands full. I’m sorry you were upset by this. Let’s riot & storm the WP gates!!! 🙄😡🔥
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Carisa Adrienne
Casey, I truly think they hate me!!!!????
I was thinking leave it to me to upset someone when I’ve not really been around. I know I can say stuff that sounds a little crazy but it’s not the way I meant it. Just as long as we are good. I’m super happy! 🙂 💜
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Casey Michael
I just found them all in my spam folder which I never check. I think WP is out to get you, Carisa!!! 💚😉
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha… I think they hate me.. What’s up with that? I’ll try and comment on one and see if it shows up
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Casey Michael
I’m trying to go back & reply to the ones I’ve missed.
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Lynz Real Cooking
Lovely!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Lynz!! ❤️:)
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meganmilesauthor
Gorgeous imagery in this poem. Nicely done, Carisa!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Megan!! I found it today in one of my notebooks. I’m funny about finding things out of the blue… I always think it’s some sort of a sign! 🙂 It made me smile when I saw you comment. 🙂
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Jennifer Calvert
Aww ❤️ stunning!
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, Jennifer I feel like I can hear your sweet accent when I read your words. I love that ❤️. Thank you for your sweet words. I always love them! 😉
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Jennifer Calvert
Aww Carisa! You are so cute! My sweet accent! Lol ☺️ Always honey. Love your writing! ❤️
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Erika Kind
That is so sweet! Like a butterfly you send out to sprinkle love dust to this particular person! So beautiful, Carisa💖
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Erica!! Wouldn’t it be nice if love dust was real? I think I’d sprinkle it on my teenager everyday! Haha 🙂 I’m to old to either use it or have it used on me personally. Falling in love is magical though! Now I get to watch my boys 🙂
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Erika Kind
Magical for sure! And it happens just so…. And we are never too old for that 😊 Oh, how right you are…. would be really helpful to have some dust at hands with my boys… lol
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The V-Pub
Very nice, Carisa!! Each season bringing on a subtle nuance that is appreciated and savored!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Rob! Every moment is to be savored. Feeling that someone special in every aspect is a glorious feeling.
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The V-Pub
Exactly the sentiment I had when I wrote ‘What’s the sense?’. I think that the seasons have infinite appeal and uses for relaying a wide range of emotions.
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Carisa Adrienne
Exactly! Yes, I can see what you mean with your song. 🙂
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el Zaphod
awww 🙂
I feel like i just got courted 😀
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha!! Whirlwind, huh!!! 🙂
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el Zaphod
yes yes am I supposed to expect flowers and chocolate?
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Carisa Adrienne
Yes!!! Wait by your door… They should be there soon… :P. 😉
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el Zaphod
who’s they? :O
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Amitav Chowdhury
This is a fabulous write, Carisa. ♥ 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Amitav!! You always know how to make me smile so big!! I’m so happy you liked it! Means so much! ❤️:)
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Amitav Chowdhury
Always welcome. 🙂 Keep smiling, always. ♥
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persoinpoesia2015
the sweetness of memories that leave us yearning for more seasons in love. very beautiful Carisa.
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe, Antony!!! I think only beautiful words fall from your lips. Thank you for always supporting me and encouraging me. ❤️
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Rita
Oh, I love this Carisa. It’s beautiful and so loving.
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you, Rita!! ❤️❤️💓💓❤️❤️
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Darshith Badiyani
Carisa, I so love this theme and the seasonal post 😀
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Carisa Adrienne
Awe!!! Thank you!!! Love when you stop by 🙂 ❤️💕❤️
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Poet Rummager
Melodic with such charming imagery — makes me want to eat chocolates and snuggle with my love! Bravo, Carisa!!
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you!!! You’re so kind! I just read your madness poem and I’m in awe of you!! You’re brilliant!! 🙂 ❤️💕❤️
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poet NbJ
Quite lovely. Only song I enjoy by Mopheads 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Hehe!! They aren’t my favorite band but I like a few of their songs. 🙂 Thank you for the kind words towards the piece. Makes me smile 🙂
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Kabir Malik
wow! This struck right inside my Heart, Carisa 🙂
Brilliant, soulful, thoughtful, awesome, everything.
And, hey.. I mailed you once or twice. How are you dear?
Also, Today is my Birthday :’D
Yayyyy !!!!
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Carisa Adrienne
Happpppppy Borthday!!!!! Yay! 😀
I didn’t know you emailed me!!! I’m sorry!
I will go look! ❤️
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Kabir Malik
Thanks a ton 🙂
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dougstuber
Status Quo
FEBRUARY 4, 2015 / DOUGSTUBER / EDIT
Untitled We are all humans .
There is no doubt, even though this poem is 16 years old, the this type of problem
is now a lot worse than back then.
Status Quo
For now the streets are cluttered:
The poor kill off the poor,
But this won’t last forever
If the “Quo” keeps getting worse.
Guns for sale in neighborhoods
Where crime is the only living
Quarts and vials and bullets
Take without ever giving.
“Innocent” bystanders
Are the ones to blame.
Standing by in times like these
Leaves everything the same.
The quo goes “living standards
Will be on the decline.”
While multi-national barons
Continue their money climb.
No chums around a fireplace
When you can’t pay the bills.
While money-man is traveling
In search of bigger thrills.
Sooner rather than later
The poor will raise their arms.
Replacing all the suited men
Regardless of the harm.
The system as we know it’
Is fading thanks to this:
The greedy haven’t realized
Their life ain’t worth a piss.
The ticking clock inside the bomb
Has passed the witching hour.
There is little hope for most,
So when will freedom flower?
It will when people with the time
Turn to lend a hand,
It will when greedy governors
Give back a hunk of land
The quo has made it possible
For us to live like rats.
Your life to them means nothing
You could end up a stat.
As the status quo gets worse
Violence rules the day.
We better help each other now.
Let us pray.
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Carisa Adrienne
Doug 🙂 So do you leave poems for everyone you leave a comment for? 🙂
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linorobles
Im FEELING that..👏
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Carisa Adrienne
Woohoo! That makes me a happy girl 😉❤️
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linorobles
You’re going to make me pick my pen back up..lol.😎 keep them coming.
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dougstuber
Your passion makes me want to leave another poem for this exact post.
So here you go, and more on theme this time I hope.
Bright eyes dig up a question from generations ago:
You want to know why the wind blew us
Together, how our sons will grow, when we will
Meet again, where will we be as one again?
Training gives you the desire to examine cause and
Effect. Experiences about as wide apart as possible
Come at us, yet we harmonize, learn each other’s secrets,
Give what we know the other will love, provide
Sanctuary in a world spinning out of control for so
Many. This I offer to distinguish myself from regular
Men, be they handsome or young: a complete heart
With continued support, undying gratitude, massage
Therapy, attempts at cooking, quite a way with words.
I expect you to smile when we chat, remain a solid
Force, a muse for my art, the reason I will always
Yearn for more, forever the target of happy life,
Memories (plans?) and a fresh heart, made whole
By the time we spent sincerely swirled, sufficiently
Molded to continually receive jolts of good news,
Connected forever by this love, complex, alive, strong.
And to answer the question, no I don’t leave poems willy-nilly, but only in the case of affectionate connection. Usually are close philosophical match is required. An emotional match also can trigger the “Send-a-poem” response.
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Carisa Adrienne
Look at you!! You’re always leaving me such beautiful comments.
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you again for finding my words have a deep connection. I think that’s the greatest compliment when someone can feel something through my words. 😉
Doug I think you are a great writer. 🙂
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desertmoon62
sigh 💜 this…
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