Paradise in Hell

02 Oct 2015

39 Comments

Paradise in Hell

I hope your hell is filled with…

beautiful smiles

vibrant pictures

favorite songs

forgiving eyes

kind voices

wild nights

memories

promises

bravery

dreams

success

laughs

kisses

Of Me

Carisa Adrienne

Posted in Poems and tagged betrayed, broken heart, forgivness, hell, hurting my children, personal, poems, poetry, sisters, writing

39 thoughts on “Paradise in Hell”

aramsey_poet on October 2, 2015 at 4:03 pm said:

Ultimate revenge for the betrayer?

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- Carisa Adrienne on October 2, 2015 at 4:10 pm said:
  
  Ahhh…. Yes, it is : ) ❤️😉
  
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  - aramsey_poet on October 2, 2015 at 4:44 pm said:
    
    Well conveyed. I liked it.
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on October 2, 2015 at 4:45 pm said:
      
      Thank you! I was hoping it would be understood! Thank you for getting me! ❤️😉
      
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Erika Kind on October 2, 2015 at 4:11 pm said:

This is so very beautiful and it shows your loving spirit. There should never be anything else but love… and hell will disappear.

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The V-Pub on October 2, 2015 at 4:15 pm said:

Revenge is a dish best served cold! Loved it, Carisa!

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- Carisa Adrienne on October 2, 2015 at 6:14 pm said:
  
  Rob, thank you! : ) ❤️
  I’m not a vengeful person… I’m actually extremely forgiving… But when it comes to my kids… I’m a killer : )
  
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  - The V-Pub on October 2, 2015 at 7:26 pm said:
    
    Yes, which reminds me of your lioness post. ❤ Never cross a lioness. 🙂
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on October 3, 2015 at 12:00 am said:
      
      : ) you are always so kind to me! Thank you for making me always feel so good.
      Thank you!
      
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rachel on October 2, 2015 at 4:37 pm said:

YES!

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- Carisa Adrienne on October 2, 2015 at 4:46 pm said:
  
  Girl!!! Fo Sho!! ❤️
  
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  - rachel on October 2, 2015 at 4:47 pm said:
    
    missing you would be hell. ❤️
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on October 2, 2015 at 5:42 pm said:
      
      Gurl, consider yourself never going to hell 😉❤️
      
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Casey Michael Smith on October 2, 2015 at 5:56 pm said:

This makes me smile. AGAIN!

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- Carisa Adrienne on October 2, 2015 at 6:10 pm said:
  
  Casey! We just get each other’s writings : )
  Hehe!
  
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  - Casey Michael Smith on October 2, 2015 at 8:55 pm said:
    
    It’s a reality we both must face!
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on October 2, 2015 at 11:28 pm said:
      
      Hehe ; ) I’m facing it!; )
      
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Anonymous on October 2, 2015 at 7:33 pm said:

That ending was brilliant!!

Hope you’re doing well Carisa ❤

Best to you and the family x

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- J.T.O'Sullivan on October 2, 2015 at 7:34 pm said:
  
  Sorry, wasn’t logged in for some reason ❤
  
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- Carisa Adrienne on October 2, 2015 at 11:32 pm said:
  
  Joshua! Thank you!! So nice to see you’re sweet words and face! ❤️
  Yes! I’m doing well! Hope you are too! : )
  
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hooklineandinkwell on October 3, 2015 at 12:25 pm said:

Love the brevity of this 🙂

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- Carisa Adrienne on October 3, 2015 at 12:43 pm said:
  
  Thank you! Sometimes the fewer words make it simple but powerful; )
  I’m so glad it was conveyed that way.
  Thank you!
  
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  - hooklineandinkwell on October 3, 2015 at 2:24 pm said:
    
    I completely agree…it takes a skilled pen to paint such a picture with so very few words :)…you are welcome!
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on October 3, 2015 at 2:56 pm said:
      
      Ahhhh… So humbled : ). Thank you so much!
      
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    - hooklineandinkwell on October 3, 2015 at 9:11 pm said:
      
      My pleasure 🙂
      
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lifeconfusions on October 3, 2015 at 1:52 pm said:

LOOOVEEE this Carisa!! The ending deserves a standing ovation really !!

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- Carisa Adrienne on October 3, 2015 at 2:33 pm said:
  
  bows ❤️❤️❤️
  Zee!! Thank you!!! : )
  I was hoping I conveyed it the way my mind was thinking it : )
  I’ve always believed success is the best revenge. I’m not a vengeful person…..
  But it’s nice to have it all together when they see you ; )
  
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  - lifeconfusions on October 5, 2015 at 10:14 am said:
    
    I know what you are saying Carisa, Also sometimes we just need to write it off, a way to vent and have some fun with writing too, it was such a great piece of writing altogether! 🙂 ❤
    
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Laura on October 3, 2015 at 7:08 pm said:

This is great!

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- Carisa Adrienne on October 4, 2015 at 12:30 pm said:
  
  Thank you!!! I’m so glad you understood it! I know it could possibly have different meanings! Hehe! ❤️😘
  
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  - Laura on October 4, 2015 at 12:58 pm said:
    
    Oh no, I get it and that’s why I love it so much!
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on October 4, 2015 at 1:20 pm said:
      
      Hehe! I knew you got it! That’s why I love YOU so much : )
      
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    - Laura on October 4, 2015 at 2:42 pm said:
      
      ♡♡♡
      
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Kabir Malik on October 5, 2015 at 1:55 am said:

Hey Carisa!
Everyday you were in my thoughts.
I wanted to read what all you have shared and I am sorry for not being able to. Was not in town and tangled up.
It had been a long, tiring and a beautiful weekend.
My blog will soon reflect that.
During this time I wrote many couplets and a few poems while travelling. Though, all are in Hindi. 🙂

Hey, about this poem. I have now realized that sometimes I am able to see world through your eyes because of your words.
Its wonderful and you are amazing as always.

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Kabir Malik on October 5, 2015 at 2:05 am said:

Please tell me where do you find so connecting images.

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- Carisa Adrienne on October 5, 2015 at 5:33 pm said:
  
  Hehe! I think it’s called Google! 😉
  
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rubiredsaid on December 2, 2015 at 7:05 am said:

First I must greet my friend in words, secondly this is a site I miss when I am not doing too well. I will not see you or hear your voice in person but rest assured you are dear to me in poetry!
You developed your own coping mechanism your caring attitude has lifted many, so in my eyes you are a gift, friend, sister, and the good in people I see when I come across them!
Talented you are, and those close to you are “blessed” to have you with them!
I appreciate your reading my poems and commenting; even acknowledging them is good enough!
Though I have had to slow down due to the health problems I have and the stays in hospital, I manage to read who I can bit by bit!
I see you have changed up your site again, great!
Writing as you do, when I read I enjoy the varied diet of sad, glad, and the “elevated spirited” person you are. Shining like a beacon you are one of the pleasant poets I am happy to drop in on!
I’m able to sit up a short while and thought I’d let you know I still read you and as I recover better will interact accordingly!
Bless you and thanks for being you!
All the best!
Redrebelremarks.

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ThePower&TheG on December 11, 2015 at 7:55 am said:

https://thelighteningandthefire.wordpress.com/2015/12/11/blood-to-holy-water/

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mopana on January 17, 2016 at 11:14 am said:

Only few words and so beautiful, Carisa 🙂

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