Sometimes Silver Linings are Blue

Sorry Not Sorry

This time

Today is too late as I’m done and won’t be found 

Unlike the hourglass I won’t be turned around


Carisa Adrienne

9/12/2015

  

 

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22 thoughts on “This time

  1. I love the decisiveness in your lines! That reminds me to that quote:
    A mind that is stretched by a new experience can never go back to its old dimensions. Oliver Wendell Holmes, Jr.

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    • Erika,
      I love that quote! Thank you for posting it. I love quotes… I love words. My house is filled with words everywhere. ; )

      Thank you for the kind words regarding my poem. I wanted to make sure I put terms about time in it. I love poems that have double meaning. ❀️

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      • Yep, I noticed that πŸ˜‰ and I like it a lot that you do that! Haha, you remind me of my kitchen. For years it was pinned with quotes all over in order to remind me of keeping up the track. Glad you liked that quote. Also I am glad I found your blog. πŸ’–

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  2. Today is too late indeed! For me, this poem speaks of the promise of a new day. Its a wonderful poem!

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  3. I love the immensity of wisdom you were able to capture in just few words. I’m astounded by your ability to write so beautifully Carisa!

    Don’t know why but it Reminded of this poem by Dr.Seuss:
    “How did it get so late so soon? Its night before its afternoon. December is here before its June. My goodness how the time has flewn. How did it get so late so soon?”

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    • Ahhh….. I love that poem! I can’t believe I haven’t heard it. Love it! It’s so true!

      Zee, every time you comment you encourage me! Your words have a deep impact on me. I admire all your writings in posts and comments. Always so kind. ❀️
      Thank you!

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  4. Wonderful …
    That touched deeply!

    Ma’am, I do not know about the world, but, you can count me as your fan!

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  5. This is wonderful Carisa πŸ˜‰

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  6. Blunt and to the point! No flowery language. Love it!! πŸ’–

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  7. rubiredsaid on said:

    Simply pure, realistic!
    The hour glass can go on and on if you let it.

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