This time

13 Sep 2015

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This time

Today is too late as I’m done and won’t be found

Unlike the hourglass I won’t be turned around

Carisa Adrienne

9/12/2015

Posted in Poems and tagged hourglass, personal, poems, poetry, relationships, time, writings

22 thoughts on “This time”

Erika Kind on September 13, 2015 at 9:25 am said:

I love the decisiveness in your lines! That reminds me to that quote:
A mind that is stretched by a new experience can never go back to its old dimensions. Oliver Wendell Holmes, Jr.

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- Carisa Adrienne on September 13, 2015 at 9:41 am said:
  
  Erika,
  I love that quote! Thank you for posting it. I love quotes… I love words. My house is filled with words everywhere. ; )
  
  Thank you for the kind words regarding my poem. I wanted to make sure I put terms about time in it. I love poems that have double meaning. ❤️
  
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  - Erika Kind on September 13, 2015 at 9:47 am said:
    
    Yep, I noticed that 😉 and I like it a lot that you do that! Haha, you remind me of my kitchen. For years it was pinned with quotes all over in order to remind me of keeping up the track. Glad you liked that quote. Also I am glad I found your blog. 💖
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on September 13, 2015 at 9:52 am said:
      
      Ahhh… I’m so glad my passion shows 🙂
      That’s my favorite type of compliment.
      I know it takes a creative mind to think outside the box. You my friend have creative mind. ❤️
      
      Yup! That’s why I have words all over my house. It’s to remind me to be grateful for all I have. ❤️
      
      So glad we found each other’s blogs too💗
      
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    - Erika Kind on September 13, 2015 at 9:58 am said:
      
      Thank you, that was lovely. I think we don’t even need a creative mind… we only need to leave it at times… haha. I love how you spread those beautiful messages around you at home and also inspire your surrounding and the blogshpere 💖
      Looks like kindred spirits met again. So let’s raise our glasses 🍷🍷
      
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    - Carisa Adrienne on September 13, 2015 at 10:18 am said:
      
      Cheers ❤️ Clink : )
      
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    - Erika Kind on September 13, 2015 at 10:22 am said:
      
      😀💖
      
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The V-Pub on September 13, 2015 at 10:17 am said:

Today is too late indeed! For me, this poem speaks of the promise of a new day. Its a wonderful poem!

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- Carisa Adrienne on September 13, 2015 at 10:19 am said:
  
  Ahhh… Rob, I’m so glad it spoke to you. I love it when my words are heard without sound.
  
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lifeconfusions on September 13, 2015 at 1:45 pm said:

I love the immensity of wisdom you were able to capture in just few words. I’m astounded by your ability to write so beautifully Carisa!

Don’t know why but it Reminded of this poem by Dr.Seuss:
“How did it get so late so soon? Its night before its afternoon. December is here before its June. My goodness how the time has flewn. How did it get so late so soon?”

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- Carisa Adrienne on September 13, 2015 at 3:24 pm said:
  
  Ahhh….. I love that poem! I can’t believe I haven’t heard it. Love it! It’s so true!
  
  Zee, every time you comment you encourage me! Your words have a deep impact on me. I admire all your writings in posts and comments. Always so kind. ❤️
  Thank you!
  
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Kabir Malik on September 13, 2015 at 2:01 pm said:

Wonderful …
That touched deeply!

Ma’am, I do not know about the world, but, you can count me as your fan!

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- Carisa Adrienne on September 13, 2015 at 3:12 pm said:
  
  Ahhh… You just made my day! Yay! I’ve got a fan ❤️
  
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  - Kabir Malik on September 13, 2015 at 3:13 pm said:
    
    Hehe!
    
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persoinpoesia2015 on September 14, 2015 at 2:39 am said:

👏 bravo.

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Darshith Badiyani on September 15, 2015 at 4:15 am said:

This is wonderful Carisa 😉

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- Carisa Adrienne on September 16, 2015 at 5:02 am said:
  
  Darshith, thank you so much! I love hourglasses! I think it’s more fascinating than watching a clock… It truly makes you realize how time passes by so fast! : )
  
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  - Darshith Badiyani on September 16, 2015 at 5:04 am said:
    
    Indeed! I think, your obsession for hourglass will make me get one for me 😀
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on September 16, 2015 at 5:08 am said:
      
      Yay! ❤️
      
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Poet Rummager on September 15, 2015 at 1:40 pm said:

Blunt and to the point! No flowery language. Love it!! 💖

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rubiredsaid on September 15, 2015 at 7:40 pm said:

Simply pure, realistic!
The hour glass can go on and on if you let it.

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- Carisa Adrienne on September 16, 2015 at 5:08 am said:
  
  Thank you so much!
  Sometimes the fewer Words are more powerful!
  Yes the hourglass keeps on moving.
  Maybe that’s my silver lining… : )
  Showing how you have to keep going too.
  ❤️
  
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