Don’t bother me with your lies
Don’t disturb me with your alibis
Don’t distract me with your eyes
Don’t come to me with your cries
Don’t meet me with your disguise
Darling, touching me will be your demise
-Carisa Adrienne
Don’t bother me with your lies
Don’t disturb me with your alibis
Don’t distract me with your eyes
Don’t come to me with your cries
Don’t meet me with your disguise
Darling, touching me will be your demise
-Carisa Adrienne
26 thoughts on “Demise”
jaiminder
Oh angry I suppose 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha… 😉
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The V-Pub
The photo matches the resolve in your poem, Carisa. Well done! Have you heard Mayer Hawthorne singing “The Walk”? It reminds me of your poem today:
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you! So much! That makes me smile 🙂 I never heard the song “The Walk” before. I had to go and listen to it. I love it! I’m going to put it on my playlist 🙂
The video didn’t show up in your message. I’m going to try and post it in mine.
I love it 🙂
Btw.. I was on your site this morning and I saw you have a playlist of songs I could listen to. I’m so jealous!!! I want one of those. I always put my playlist in my pages sections. I knew you’d be a lil Kim fan 😉
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The V-Pub
You’re welcome, and I’m glad that you liked the song! The playlist widget is cool, isn’t it? I haven’t updated in a while, and I need to add some new songs to it.
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Carisa Adrienne
Ahhh! Your video did show up!
Twice the pleasure 🙂
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The V-Pub
It seems like it’s hit or miss on WP these days with links. And yes, I like Lil’ Kim! 😀
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eroticmusings
Powerful, The reader cannot help but wonder 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha… I think we’ve all been betrayed before 🙂 We’ve all had a broken heart.
No matter how long it’s been I can always feel it. I can always write like it’s happening now. 💔❤️
Thank you for reading, you always give attention to my pieces. I love that ❤️
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Richard Ankers
Zing!
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Carisa Adrienne
A Zing
For a King
Who had a Fling
Heart felt the Sting
My eyes were a Spring
No more bling Bling
I threw back my Ring
It’s no big Thing ❤️
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Richard Ankers
Glad you still sing 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Ohhhhh! Forgot that one 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
I think maybe that should be next poem 🙂
You gave me the inspiration ❤️
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Richard Ankers
Yes, you should post it 🙂
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linorobles
Great piece equals inspiration for me☺
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Carisa Adrienne
🙂
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rachel
your words… i love ’em! xo
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Carisa Adrienne
Ditto ❤️
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Darshith Badiyani
Love the play of words 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you for the words:)
I tend to rhyme a lot. My kids tell me, “Enough Mom.” Haha 🙂
Thank you again:)
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Darshith Badiyani
Wow, that will be compliments 😉 I am bad with rhymes 😉
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Carisa Adrienne
It’s just nickel and dimes ❤️😉
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NbJ
exquisite
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you so much! 🙂
That means so much:)
I enjoy your work:)
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NbJ
Humbled
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