Demise

25 Aug 2015

Demise

Don’t bother me with your lies
Don’t disturb me with your alibis
Don’t distract me with your eyes
Don’t come to me with your cries
Don’t meet me with your disguise

Darling, touching me will be your demise

-Carisa Adrienne

Posted in Poems and tagged heartbreak, leaving, Lies, life, love, poems, poetry, relationships, writing

26 thoughts on “Demise”

jaiminder on August 25, 2015 at 10:28 am said:

Oh angry I suppose 🙂

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 25, 2015 at 10:28 am said:
  
  Haha… 😉
  
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The V-Pub on August 25, 2015 at 10:41 am said:

The photo matches the resolve in your poem, Carisa. Well done! Have you heard Mayer Hawthorne singing “The Walk”? It reminds me of your poem today:

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 25, 2015 at 11:19 am said:
  
  Thank you! So much! That makes me smile 🙂 I never heard the song “The Walk” before. I had to go and listen to it. I love it! I’m going to put it on my playlist 🙂
  
  The video didn’t show up in your message. I’m going to try and post it in mine.
  I love it 🙂
  
  Btw.. I was on your site this morning and I saw you have a playlist of songs I could listen to. I’m so jealous!!! I want one of those. I always put my playlist in my pages sections. I knew you’d be a lil Kim fan 😉
  
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  - The V-Pub on August 25, 2015 at 12:26 pm said:
    
    You’re welcome, and I’m glad that you liked the song! The playlist widget is cool, isn’t it? I haven’t updated in a while, and I need to add some new songs to it.
    
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- Carisa Adrienne on August 25, 2015 at 11:37 am said:
  
  Ahhh! Your video did show up!
  Twice the pleasure 🙂
  
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  - The V-Pub on August 25, 2015 at 12:28 pm said:
    
    It seems like it’s hit or miss on WP these days with links. And yes, I like Lil’ Kim! 😀
    
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eroticmusings on August 25, 2015 at 10:50 am said:

Powerful, The reader cannot help but wonder 🙂

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 25, 2015 at 11:22 am said:
  
  Haha… I think we’ve all been betrayed before 🙂 We’ve all had a broken heart.
  No matter how long it’s been I can always feel it. I can always write like it’s happening now. 💔❤️
  Thank you for reading, you always give attention to my pieces. I love that ❤️
  
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Richard Ankers on August 25, 2015 at 11:09 am said:

Zing!

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 25, 2015 at 11:31 am said:
  
  A Zing
  For a King
  Who had a Fling
  Heart felt the Sting
  My eyes were a Spring
  No more bling Bling
  I threw back my Ring
  It’s no big Thing ❤️
  
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  - Richard Ankers on August 25, 2015 at 11:40 am said:
    
    Glad you still sing 🙂
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on August 25, 2015 at 11:42 am said:
      
      Ohhhhh! Forgot that one 🙂
      
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- Carisa Adrienne on August 25, 2015 at 11:36 am said:
  
  I think maybe that should be next poem 🙂
  You gave me the inspiration ❤️
  
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  - Richard Ankers on August 25, 2015 at 11:40 am said:
    
    Yes, you should post it 🙂
    
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linorobles on August 25, 2015 at 4:34 pm said:

Great piece equals inspiration for me☺

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 25, 2015 at 5:34 pm said:
  
  🙂
  
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rachel on August 25, 2015 at 4:53 pm said:

your words… i love ’em! xo

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 25, 2015 at 5:18 pm said:
  
  Ditto ❤️
  
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Darshith Badiyani on August 27, 2015 at 3:43 am said:

Love the play of words 🙂

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 27, 2015 at 10:23 am said:
  
  Thank you for the words:)
  I tend to rhyme a lot. My kids tell me, “Enough Mom.” Haha 🙂
  
  Thank you again:)
  
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  - Darshith Badiyani on August 27, 2015 at 10:48 am said:
    
    Wow, that will be compliments 😉 I am bad with rhymes 😉
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on August 27, 2015 at 10:50 am said:
      
      It’s just nickel and dimes ❤️😉
      
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NbJ on August 27, 2015 at 8:02 pm said:

exquisite

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 27, 2015 at 8:19 pm said:
  
  Thank you so much! 🙂
  That means so much:)
  I enjoy your work:)
  
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  - NbJ on August 27, 2015 at 8:22 pm said:
    
    Humbled
    
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