My lips harbor vitality capturing your ships soul
Rescuing you from despair of the treacherous black hole
Eyes withering without glistening glow
Drifting with speed with no place to go
Stroking your vessel with vibrant pastels
Hundreds of pennies with wishing wells
Waking your sails bringing them alive
Your broken compass begins to thrive
Anchoring against constant waves of the ocean
Navigating your travels toward the beacon of emotion
Sailing ashore with ease surpassing me
Leaving me capsized stranded in the
Dead Sea
-Carisa Adrienne
25 thoughts on “ Dead Sea”
deanjbaker
Good to see this
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you! I published it before I was done…
I admit that wasn’t the first time I’ve done that. Hope I corrected all my fumbles 😉
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rachel
beautiful.
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Carisa Adrienne
You’re so kind, Rachel ❤️
As I was posting it here…. You were someone I knew that would relate…
Thank you! Beautiful Girl!
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rachel
wow. i just felt my heart melt a little. ❤️ thanks for thinking of me. xo
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Carisa Adrienne
Ahhh… Of course.. I read your posts…I knew you’d relate because I relate to your posts ❤️
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barbaraojei
Beautiful poetry ❤
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Carisa Adrienne
Much love, Barbara ❤️
Thank you!
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chyfrin
the last part – a lament – a fallen resurrected and laving her behind
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Carisa Adrienne
Exactly… Love is a double edged sword..
Thank you for reading ❤️
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Malaika
You are very creative Carisa. Thank you for sharing your talents with us 😊
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Carisa Adrienne
Malaika, you are so kind ❤️
Thank you for reading. You make me smile ☺️
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dickyjloweman
This is great. I’m a big fan of the ocean and sailing, so this close to my heart. The first line is perfect. Nicely done.
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Carisa Adrienne
Thank you! Glad it spoke to you ❤️
Being lost at sea would be so bleak.
That’s how it feels when you get left behind or betrayed. ..
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dickyjloweman
That’s a true statement, coming from someone who has been both left behind and lost at sea…
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Kriswasp
I read a lot of double entendre in this…is that right? Some truly excellent lines in here. Really good, very well done 🙂
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Carisa Adrienne
Yes! You would be correct. Thank you for the kind words. 🙂
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xheonelfaez
Beautiful… Beautiful poetry
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Carisa Adrienne
I love your comment when it comes to my words. ❤️
I’m so glad you like it. Thank you!
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booguloo
So where do you hang your hat?
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Carisa Adrienne
On the coat rack 😉
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booguloo
OK wise guy eh???.. I outa…… be able to to put the 3 stooges voice overs here…. If it’s not SoCal you have a doppelganger here. here in Ventura county
Michael –smile–
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Carisa Adrienne
Haha…I don’t live in SoCal 🙂
I live in humble Oklahoma ❤️
Glad you got my humor 🙂
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persoinpoesia2015
Superb
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Carisa Adrienne
I am humbled by your kind words. Thank you so much 🙂
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