Sometimes Silver Linings are Blue

25 thoughts on “ Dead Sea”

1. deanjbaker on August 8, 2015 at 11:40 am said:

   Good to see this

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   • Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 11:50 am said:

     Thank you! I published it before I was done…
     I admit that wasn’t the first time I’ve done that. Hope I corrected all my fumbles 😉

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2. rachel on August 8, 2015 at 12:12 pm said:

   beautiful.

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   • Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 12:21 pm said:

     You’re so kind, Rachel ❤️
     As I was posting it here…. You were someone I knew that would relate…
     Thank you! Beautiful Girl!

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     • rachel on August 8, 2015 at 12:55 pm said:

       wow. i just felt my heart melt a little. ❤️ thanks for thinking of me. xo

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       • Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 1:45 pm said:

         Ahhh… Of course.. I read your posts…I knew you’d relate because I relate to your posts ❤️

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3. barbaraojei on August 8, 2015 at 12:28 pm said:

   Beautiful poetry ❤

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   • Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 12:45 pm said:

     Much love, Barbara ❤️
     Thank you!

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4. chyfrin on August 8, 2015 at 12:51 pm said:

   the last part – a lament – a fallen resurrected and laving her behind

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   • Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 3:58 pm said:

     Exactly… Love is a double edged sword..
     Thank you for reading ❤️

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5. Malaika on August 8, 2015 at 5:06 pm said:

   You are very creative Carisa. Thank you for sharing your talents with us 😊

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   • Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 5:41 pm said:

     Malaika, you are so kind ❤️
     Thank you for reading. You make me smile ☺️

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6. dickyjloweman on August 9, 2015 at 1:05 pm said:

   This is great. I’m a big fan of the ocean and sailing, so this close to my heart. The first line is perfect. Nicely done.

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   • Carisa Adrienne on August 9, 2015 at 1:54 pm said:

     Thank you! Glad it spoke to you ❤️
     Being lost at sea would be so bleak.
     That’s how it feels when you get left behind or betrayed. ..

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     • dickyjloweman on August 9, 2015 at 2:44 pm said:

       That’s a true statement, coming from someone who has been both left behind and lost at sea…

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7. Kriswasp on August 10, 2015 at 2:28 pm said:

   I read a lot of double entendre in this…is that right? Some truly excellent lines in here. Really good, very well done 🙂

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   • Carisa Adrienne on August 11, 2015 at 9:17 am said:

     Yes! You would be correct. Thank you for the kind words. 🙂

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8. xheonelfaez on August 12, 2015 at 3:32 pm said:

   Beautiful… Beautiful poetry

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   • Carisa Adrienne on August 13, 2015 at 7:02 am said:

     I love your comment when it comes to my words. ❤️
     I’m so glad you like it. Thank you!

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9. booguloo on August 15, 2015 at 11:23 pm said:

   So where do you hang your hat?

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   • Carisa Adrienne on August 16, 2015 at 12:35 am said:

     On the coat rack 😉

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     • booguloo on August 16, 2015 at 7:50 am said:

       OK wise guy eh???.. I outa…… be able to to put the 3 stooges voice overs here…. If it’s not SoCal you have a doppelganger here. here in Ventura county
       Michael –smile–

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       • Carisa Adrienne on August 16, 2015 at 1:20 pm said:

         Haha…I don’t live in SoCal 🙂
         I live in humble Oklahoma ❤️
         Glad you got my humor 🙂

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10. persoinpoesia2015 on August 26, 2015 at 2:35 am said:

    Superb

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    • Carisa Adrienne on August 26, 2015 at 8:34 am said:

      I am humbled by your kind words. Thank you so much 🙂

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