Dead Sea

08 Aug 2015

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Dead Sea

My lips harbor vitality capturing your ships soul

Rescuing you from despair of the treacherous black hole

Eyes withering without glistening glow

Drifting with speed with no place to go

Stroking your vessel with vibrant pastels

Hundreds of pennies with wishing wells

Waking your sails bringing them alive

Your broken compass begins to thrive

Anchoring against constant waves of the ocean

Navigating your travels toward the beacon of emotion

Sailing ashore with ease surpassing me

Leaving me capsized stranded in the

Dead Sea

-Carisa Adrienne

Posted in Betrayed, Dreams, Life, Love, Needs, Poems, Poetry and tagged actions, betrayed, broken, Dead Sea, emotions, glory, journey, left, love, poems, poetry, relationships, rescued, sailing, saved, waters

25 thoughts on “ Dead Sea”

deanjbaker on August 8, 2015 at 11:40 am said:

Good to see this

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 11:50 am said:
  
  Thank you! I published it before I was done…
  I admit that wasn’t the first time I’ve done that. Hope I corrected all my fumbles 😉
  
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rachel on August 8, 2015 at 12:12 pm said:

beautiful.

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 12:21 pm said:
  
  You’re so kind, Rachel ❤️
  As I was posting it here…. You were someone I knew that would relate…
  Thank you! Beautiful Girl!
  
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  - rachel on August 8, 2015 at 12:55 pm said:
    
    wow. i just felt my heart melt a little. ❤️ thanks for thinking of me. xo
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 1:45 pm said:
      
      Ahhh… Of course.. I read your posts…I knew you’d relate because I relate to your posts ❤️
      
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barbaraojei on August 8, 2015 at 12:28 pm said:

Beautiful poetry ❤

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 12:45 pm said:
  
  Much love, Barbara ❤️
  Thank you!
  
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chyfrin on August 8, 2015 at 12:51 pm said:

the last part – a lament – a fallen resurrected and laving her behind

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 3:58 pm said:
  
  Exactly… Love is a double edged sword..
  Thank you for reading ❤️
  
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Malaika on August 8, 2015 at 5:06 pm said:

You are very creative Carisa. Thank you for sharing your talents with us 😊

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 8, 2015 at 5:41 pm said:
  
  Malaika, you are so kind ❤️
  Thank you for reading. You make me smile ☺️
  
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dickyjloweman on August 9, 2015 at 1:05 pm said:

This is great. I’m a big fan of the ocean and sailing, so this close to my heart. The first line is perfect. Nicely done.

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 9, 2015 at 1:54 pm said:
  
  Thank you! Glad it spoke to you ❤️
  Being lost at sea would be so bleak.
  That’s how it feels when you get left behind or betrayed. ..
  
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  - dickyjloweman on August 9, 2015 at 2:44 pm said:
    
    That’s a true statement, coming from someone who has been both left behind and lost at sea…
    
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Kriswasp on August 10, 2015 at 2:28 pm said:

I read a lot of double entendre in this…is that right? Some truly excellent lines in here. Really good, very well done 🙂

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 11, 2015 at 9:17 am said:
  
  Yes! You would be correct. Thank you for the kind words. 🙂
  
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xheonelfaez on August 12, 2015 at 3:32 pm said:

Beautiful… Beautiful poetry

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 13, 2015 at 7:02 am said:
  
  I love your comment when it comes to my words. ❤️
  I’m so glad you like it. Thank you!
  
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booguloo on August 15, 2015 at 11:23 pm said:

So where do you hang your hat?

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 16, 2015 at 12:35 am said:
  
  On the coat rack 😉
  
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  - booguloo on August 16, 2015 at 7:50 am said:
    
    OK wise guy eh???.. I outa…… be able to to put the 3 stooges voice overs here…. If it’s not SoCal you have a doppelganger here. here in Ventura county
    Michael –smile–
    
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    - Carisa Adrienne on August 16, 2015 at 1:20 pm said:
      
      Haha…I don’t live in SoCal 🙂
      I live in humble Oklahoma ❤️
      Glad you got my humor 🙂
      
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persoinpoesia2015 on August 26, 2015 at 2:35 am said:

Superb

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- Carisa Adrienne on August 26, 2015 at 8:34 am said:
  
  I am humbled by your kind words. Thank you so much 🙂
  
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